The Prince of Pomposity

the beast detests the prince of pomposity.
the chin upturned. each blackened strand of hair

in place with grease. his too white smile released
to aproned maids — the town with hordes of them.

his shoulders straight, his swagger thrills his mates.
they clink the loving cup — the weight of gold.

the prince delivers speech, to kill the beast.
the mirror grins and chases him outside.

she holds the hand of Belle - who breaks the spell,
preferring horn-y beasts to boastful toads.

as castle servants change into their skin,
they dance in conga line and imitate

the swaggering and pompous prince who splits.
now he’s the village idiot you see.

8/28/2019
SWAGGER Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Blank verse with 10 syllables except
for first line with 11 and feminine ending
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Love how you ended this one. Congrats on your win in the contest, Kim! Best always, Gershon
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
Faulkner Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Such an imaginative retelling, the last line brings it home!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:38 PM
"she holds the hand of Belle - who breaks the spell, preferring horn-y beasts to boastful toads." - Beauty and the Beast in poetry form. Gorgeous Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Glad you enjoyed and instead of Gaston dying he becomes the village idiot...lol
Lamoureux Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:15 AM
This brings a smile, he underwent quite a transformation. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Thank you, Richard!
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