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The Price

Listlessly he feeds the pigeons, strutting proudly in the park; kicking at an empty coke can, gravity has left its mark. Nattily attired he's one of many other CEOs high atop the corporate ladder, highly thought of, (what a pose!) Tired of mergers, acquisitions, weary of the daily stress; where's the joy, the satisfaction, where's the bliss of happiness? Hamptons cottage never lived in, cabin cruiser barely used; his wife's begun divorce proceedings, claims that she has been abused. Son and daughter - Utah, Texas, never sees them anymore; dad's too busy making millions, economics, what a bore! Who'd have thought a Wharton graduate with a double PhD would spend his lunch hour feeding pigeons, kicking coke cans listlessly. In his three-room penthouse office with a prospect of Times Square he seals another hefty contract, he has lost the will to care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2016 9:13:00 PM
This is the cycle of weakening behavior you have captured. The dulling and deadness of things that dwindle finally to zero at the day last breath is taken, when the last thing on one's mind is surely this: Did anybody love me? What's the difference between ignorance and apathy? someone asked. And in response: "I don't know, and I don't care."
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/18/2016 9:24:00 PM
I directed you to the wrong poem! sorry about that... thanks all the same for your time and your excellent commentary. Keith
Date: 1/1/2016 6:41:00 PM
I can't remember where I read or heard it, but it was something like; "when you get to the top, nothing is there". This poems captures that perfectly.
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Date: 1/1/2016 6:51:00 PM
Yep It certainly can be lonely up there even with all the baubles and bangles he's accumulated or rather because of them. Thanks for visiting my pages again my friend. I am most grateful. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/30/2015 10:56:00 PM
Oh my..how grand you have captured this Keith! Well done! Remembering the things worth loving keeps us human and real...awesome
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Date: 12/31/2015 12:15:00 AM
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Date: 12/31/2015 12:14:00 AM
Thanks Donna! Much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/30/2015 5:55:00 PM
What an extraordinary and intelligent write indeed , I really enjoyed reading it...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Dalia! Glad you enjoyed it... Keith
Date: 12/30/2015 4:29:00 PM
oh keith, this is brilliant and brilliantly written! you've captured his sad life so succinctly...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/30/2015 4:38:00 PM
Thanks so much! WOW, 2 bRILLS! I am most grateful for you delightful remarks! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/30/2015 12:32:00 PM
What a price to pay for success Keith - I found this so sad - a man has everything materially yet has 'nothing' in his life :-( hugs jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/30/2015 1:26:00 PM
Yeah... it's too bad. Thanks for your insightful comments Jan... much appreciated! Best wishes, Keith

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