Constructive criticism is always welcome should you have any. If you like it that's even better. This is being submitted for the Praying Mantis contest. I was completely blown away when I found out what the female does...
The Preying Praying Mantis She folds her limbs and waits quietly. He comes near, she waits silently. They do the dance, Then comes her chance. And snap! Off with his head quickly!
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