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The Pressure

The force, the pressure To become something great Is beginning to penetrate Agitate my complacency & prepare for war. I am a complex photograph Telegraph a message & maybe I'll respond Bless you with my awkward silence. Forget the violins & pay attention to my sobbing Robbing myself time & time again Never knowing love I find myself crippled, broken & undone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/23/2009 3:23:00 PM
Third from last line impressive. Keep writing. Sara
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