The Present

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To touch a thought Is to feel a raindrop To hear your voice Is to make me rejoice To see your smile Is eternity To gether our thoughts Is to be as one To smell the broken rose Is what makes you the only one Words unwrapped, can never be undone

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Carole Duet

Date: 9/17/2017 8:31:00 PM

I love this one. Just beautiful.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/15/2017 11:15:00 PM

Excelente, Arthur, Hugs Eve ~`* the captcha is , "MAN" perfect for this write :)

Darren White

Date: 9/14/2017 2:38:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem my friend

White Wolf

Date: 9/13/2017 8:37:00 PM

An impressive succinct write, my friend! Every word is heard in this!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2017 10:38:00 AM

Very beautiful and original Arthur ...the captcha is wne ...just needs I for wine.....lol

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2017 5:33:00 AM

Love the opening lines Arthur (and the rest is brilliant too:-):-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/16/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thanks Jan!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2017 5:21:00 AM

This is a beautiful write Arthur! You have masterfully crafted a brilliant poem! I surely have enjoyed reading your delightful piece here this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/16/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thank you very much Russell.