Notes About The Poem

The Present

To touch a thought
Is to feel a raindrop
To hear your voice
Is to make me rejoice
To see your smile
Is eternity
To gether our thoughts
Is to be as one
To smell the broken rose
Is what makes you the only one

Words unwrapped, can never be undone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duet Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:31 PM
I love this one. Just beautiful.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Excelente, Arthur, Hugs Eve ~`* the captcha is , "MAN" perfect for this write :)
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Such a wonderful poem my friend
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:37 PM
An impressive succinct write, my friend! Every word is heard in this!
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 10:38 AM
Very beautiful and original Arthur ...the captcha is wne ...just needs I for wine.....lol
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:33 AM
Love the opening lines Arthur (and the rest is brilliant too:-):-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:21 AM
This is a beautiful write Arthur! You have masterfully crafted a brilliant poem! I surely have enjoyed reading your delightful piece here this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
Vaso Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Thank you very much Russell.
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