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The Precipice of the Unknown

Teetering on the edge of the precipice unknown The depth of the fatal plunge to an eternal oblivion, Is of little or no concern to him who suffers in pain Who cannot control his colors like the chameleon, But prepares to hurtle downward into open abyss Who, without considering cues of his future domain, Says farewell to present earthly toil with a last kiss Considers not the seeds of anger and turmoil sown. Who willingly forfeits all the rewards of life to come Empties his pockets of whatever accumulated virtue, The chaff he casts to winds for this moment’s sake Like a plaster statue in the Musee he stands in queue, A golden gate to Evermore awaits his wandering soul In some future life he may once again be made whole.
[3. The Precipice of The Unknown] SECOND PLACE WINNER Written January 29, 2022 Especially for “Pick a Title Vol 28” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/13/2022 5:19:00 PM
Wow, Milton ~ that's a brilliant poem! It makes you wonder what the last moments of a tortured mind must think. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/13/2022 6:34:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Milt:-) Your poem is fantastic. I loved it. Bravo on this exquisite piece!
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Date: 1/30/2022 1:55:00 AM
I like to think we are given many chances in the afterlife to redeem ourselves and be "whole". Great poem Hank!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/30/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. I was thinking of one contemplating suicide when I wrote this, and I wanted to write something I thought Edward would respond favorably to.

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