The Pow's Escape

POW confined in a cage
Through Viet Cong jungles bullets raged

No sweat from his pores in unrelenting sun
Dehydration, famine, yet his needs were none

A tepid river so foul with blood’s scent
But the outcome of torture was not as meant

He tasted cool ice as his spirit soared
Freedom came fast once the war was ignored

Hovering o’er killing fields his soul’s eyes
Saw not the wounded, heard not their cries

Though his weak body lay crumpled below
Pain free he reveled on clouds, heaven’s snow

Through astral projection he’d been set free
Each day he survived, taking this journey

When rescued at last many months gone by
The US militia did not know why

GI Joe felt no hate, seemed so serene
And not one of his rescuers could glean

Why this soldier survived, what kept him sane
For they’d not escaped inside this man’s brain

The awareness he’d achieved spared his life
So he could return to his son and wife

Who’d prayed everyday that he would come home
Only to say they’d never been alone

Their spirits communed on another plane
And life as they’d known it would never be the same


*Entry for Caties Out-of-Body Experience Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol
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June 16, 2010 at 9:19 PM
carolyn, I had to go way back just now to find something of yours I'd not commented on. this one is quite interesting. I am enthralled by thiings like astral projection and would love to be able to experience it. have you?? Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Graciously thanks for all your support in my contest, Sincerely, Love, Moses
Crisci Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Congratulations on your fabulous win in Elaine's contest," Tell me a story". Your poem is so inspiring and moving, telling of GI Joe's escape and survival. I had almost gotten drafted and I could have been myself that soldier, but God somehow changed my course and spared my life; and today, Iprobably wouldn't have been alive to read your magnificent poem. Merry Christmas, Caroly and thanks for your wonderful comments. Love, cheer, and blessings, Andrew.
George   Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for participating in my contest and congratulations on your win. Your story touched me deeply. Love, Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Carolyn, Congrats on your win in Elaine's contest "Tell Me A Story", so very well deserved! Love Light Patty
Strand Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 12:01 AM
Congrats on your success in Elaine's contest Carolyn.Rgds Brian
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December 17, 2009 at 6:29 PM
Congratulations Carolyn, on this wonderful win in Elaine's contest. What a gripping story! ~ Happy Holiday to you and your family! Love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your awesome win in Elaine's contest. So well written!!! Hugs, shar xoxoxo
Byrne Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 5:57 PM
I like the idea in this and I like the pace.
Bosworth Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Great piece! As I have said before, you have a way with words that work very well.
Lewis Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 8:23 AM
I feel extremely fortunate and educated when I read your poetry. Nicely Done. TL
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August 12, 2009 at 6:15 PM
war. and it's results. nice of you to mention it. John Henry Loving III
Dray Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 7:23 AM
this is amazing. I hate how all the pro sports players get so much glory when these men are the ones that really really deserve it
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Excellent must be God inspired. Sara
Yates Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 6:57 PM
Very nice, the scenery is so powerful amazing write!
Austin Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Big mistake! I didn't mean 'by' a copy, I meant BUY a copy. Love from old fumble fingers. daver
Austin Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:27 PM
Very timely, Carolyn. Obviously, and I like the word, this man was 'aware' of something few can realize. So, what's the news on your book? When it comes out I want to by a copy. BIG lOVE, daver
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June 21, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Great job Carolyn. This one comes from a very very different place then what I'm used to seeing on the soup. Can you tell me where you went to research this case? I'd be interested in reading the complete story. Thanks for the eye opener! Oh and soup mail for you. -Yoni
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June 20, 2009 at 2:17 PM
I really like this poem!! Great job! I can see you have a gift for writing! Thank you for complimenting on my poem and welcoming me to poetry soup! I appreciate it!
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June 20, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Carolyn, I'd like to introduce your POW to a beloved friend of mine; Marion Maxwell CWO-4 U.S. Navy who died in Dak To prison. I think they would like and admire each other as much as I like and admire this poem. God Bless, Will
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June 19, 2009 at 1:00 AM
Great piece! I remember my relatives who lost their lives in war for the sake of freedom. Ernilando
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June 18, 2009 at 4:01 AM
Wow Carolyn. This poem is magnificent. The Vietnam war was "drug" along so many years. War helps the economy sometimes, but the price in lives can never be paid for. The horrors of those rice patties full of hidden traps takes a toll on sanity. This poem about sanity through astral projection, communicating beyond of one's body to a spiritual place is the only way sanity could be maintained in the midst of war's horror. Very insightful and excellent poem, my good friend. Lovingly, Dane
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June 18, 2009 at 12:43 AM
Excellent vignette would make a great movie.Rgds Brian
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June 18, 2009 at 12:02 AM
Thus I enjoyed "Your Write" thoroughly--Graphic and filled with saddened truths of wars sorrows--Yet, filled with a happy ending, amid points and messages of benefits I believe, for others to behold and to learn from!!!?:):)~"Excellent Write Dear Lady"~"My Love Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Precious Carolyn Devonshire!!!":):) Goodnight ~
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