The Powerhouse of Rain

Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed your blank verse. Would love to see more. Blank verse with strict iambic metre and not tethered by rhyme. Best wishes.

A superb poem, Kim. Weather is such a good subject for poetry as your fine poem displays. Love of the Lord to you. ~

Absolutely fascinating. A pleasure!- and a hug!

Interesting choice of adjectives here...Nice imagery in your poem..

Dear Kim, this is a very deeply moving poem that depicts how sometimes we feel when sun is hiding and rain is the only reality, seasons and how it impacts and leaves one overdressed etc youve described in an intricate manner: i especially love how youv written “ The sun still hides but does have fun to soak“ sun always finds its way to soak us when all is but dreary somehow: i want to stay in too when its cold. Pleasure reading your well woven metaphors and imagery, sending you light always.

The transformative power of nature, particularly the rain, in uplifting the mood and atmosphere of a neighborhood, Kim. The beauty and impact of rain, the changing seasons, and the contrast between the dreary winter and the hopeful arrival of spring are well-depicted. The language in the poem is descriptive and evocative, using vivid imagery to paint a picture of the rain's effect on the environment.

You certainly captured the essence of a short, necessary rainfall. I like this poem.

this is so rich with metaphors Kim. Loved the "caterpillar sun".

We have sunny but cold days. Had to repair my A/C but electricity is expensive. Lovely poem my dear friend. Hugs.

Nothing beats a good downpour to clear the air Kim. Now retired I can watch from indoors lol. Tom

Once again, you've got my skin crawling. Brrrr. Arrrgh. ~ gw