William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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The Power of Silence

*Image of Silence Effects by Pixabay.

the power of silence

his soul yelled her heart screamed~telltale faces held a deafening silence

2022 October 04
*1st Place*
The Power of Silence
~~JCB Brul: 2022 October 14

*HMS; 17 syllables.

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Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2022 at 9:44 AM i really like this. BIG congrats on top win William Kelii Kekaula October 15, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thank you, Andrea, for the laudation my friend, Aloha William

I Am Anaya October 15, 2022 at 8:41 AM Congratulations on your First Place Win! The deafening silence is the power of silence. The entire display is fabulous, I'm Faving! ~Anaya William Kelii Kekaula October 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM I am grateful, Anaya, for faving this piece that you have enjoyed my friend, thank you and Aloha William

Anisha Dutta October 14, 2022 at 10:36 PM BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP Deafening silence! Wonderful. Have Good Days. Blessings William Kelii Kekaula October 15, 2022 at 7:00 AM Thank you, Anisha, for your hospitable thoughts and heartfelt praise my friend, Aloha William

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2022 at 12:57 PM - Woow... amazing entry for the contest - Congratulations on your top 1st place, William - William Kelii Kekaula October 14, 2022 at 5:54 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise, for your welcoming considerations my friend, Aloha William

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2022 at 3:13 PM Whoa!! Their life seems to be falling apart. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara William Kelii Kekaula October 12, 2022 at 3:37 PM The length of time, Sara, control the perspective balance my friend--thanks and you're welcome, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler October 10, 2022 at 7:00 AM Blessed silence. You've expressed much in few words William. Linda William Kelii Kekaula October 10, 2022 at 7:59 AM Thanks, Linda, for your righteous understanding my friend, Aloha William

Kelly Deschler October 7, 2022 at 4:24 PM Yes, sometimes, silence is the best response... You've done an amazing job with this theme, William. The imagery itself is so powerful... Best wishes for the contest! William Kelii Kekaula October 7, 2022 at 9:11 PM Thank you, Kelly, for your spot on sentiment my friend, Aloha William

Sam Kauffman October 4, 2022 at 4:26 PM I think one is going to end up with a very high placement William. I can see this standoff of soul and heart, sputtering words and red faces of frustration. So well done! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2022 at 4:47 PM I'm appreciative of the boost, Sam, encouragement brings about a settling my friend, Aloha William