The Pound

THE POUND


He looked at me with cautious eyes
As I walked by his cage
The white whiskers on his face
Attesting to his age

I wandered down the row of strays
Looking at them all
In hopes I'd find the perfect one
And ones homelessness forestall

There were several that I liked
Most jumping at their gate
Telling me how much they'd like
To escape their current fate

But somehow I could not forget
The old guy by the door
He wasn't cute or young or spry
There was something more

I went back and took another look
While he just sat and stared
As if to say I can't believe 
That maybe someone cares

There was a sadness to his face
That stirred something inside
I knew he'd traveled rocky roads
Before being cast aside

This is the one I told them
He's going home with me
Put a collar on him
And I'll go pay the fee

And as I took him home that day
I knew right from the start
I had gained a faithful friend
And he had claimed my heart


Placed 2nd in Francine Roberts Pick A Pet contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/8/2011 2:09:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful! CR
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/8/2011 4:32:00 PM
Sounds like another animal lover. Thanks for your comments Caryl
Date: 7/14/2011 7:38:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Bob
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Date: 7/13/2011 2:41:00 AM
Excellent, loved it! lee
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/13/2011 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Lee. Appreciate the comments.
Date: 7/12/2011 8:43:00 AM
Heartfelt poem. I would like to know if this is a true story..Wonderful writing.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/12/2011 9:08:00 AM
A composite really. Over the years we have adopted 8 dogs of various ages, shapes, sizes and personalities. Loved them all. Thanks for the kudos.
Date: 7/11/2011 3:06:00 PM
okay this wonderful write is right up there where it belongs Bob. fantastic write and a hearty congratulations to you for it -Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:36:00 PM
Thanks Bob. Appreciate the kudos.
Date: 7/11/2011 2:58:00 PM
Must have been a dog. No cat is going to jump at the gate. I liked this a lot and congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:39:00 PM
Actually, over the years, it has been eight dogs and we loved them all. Thanks for your congrats.
Date: 7/11/2011 2:53:00 PM
Congrats..Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 7/11/2011 10:46:00 AM
Bob, I would have taken the old dog home too. Beautifully written and you had me in tears thinking of the commercials we see featuring old or abused animals that need homes. Excellent! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:40:00 PM
I'm with you Carolyn. I can't watch them. BobQ
Date: 7/11/2011 10:25:00 AM
my special cheers to you for the fine win, bob! a surprising treat! :) huggs!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Nette.
Date: 7/11/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win in the pet contest today. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 7/11/2011 8:52:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your super second place win with this wonderful write luv.. enjoy..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Linda Marie. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/11/2011 8:46:00 AM
congrats on your second place win in the contest Bob with this wonderful entry
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/11/2011 8:43:00 PM
I appreciate your kudos Francine. Thank you
Date: 7/5/2011 7:22:00 PM
Ohhhhh You made me cry. I'm like that too. I probably would have wanted to take them all home with me. I think you both lucked out. Great and wonderful story. God Bless, JB
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/6/2011 6:53:00 AM
Over the years between cats and dogs, we have adopted 18, two dogs currently. And they have all given us more then we give them
Date: 7/4/2011 7:24:00 AM
soup mail Bob
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:44:00 PM
ABSOLUTE QUALITY,WAS JUST SAYING TO MY MRS ABOUT YOUR SCRIPT,THAT ITS SO ORIGIONAL, YET BRILLIANTLY PUT TOGETHER .. BIG UP ;)
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