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The Pond

As life's energy swirls all around, Peace settles in my breast, Sitting quiet and still, as turtles splash in and out of the water nearby, And a playful otter giggles, waiting for a playmate to join in his fun. The wind jogs around us all, giving the downy hair of a cattail a piggyback into the peaceful wood. White cotton clouds make their way, lazily across the sapphire sky, Making sure not to disturb the brilliant sun, Who's rays transform the rippling water into glittering diamonds before my eyes. But before that beaming magician can perform his magic again on the flat canvas before me, The lonely otter splashes, announcing his departure and peaking his eyes in farewell. As I too depart, I smile, Feeling at one with nature.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/26/2009 3:53:00 PM
This one has me smiling. I really like the uplifting end. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:24:00 PM
Melissa, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Melissa. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:46:00 AM
Very lovely, Melissa. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:53:00 PM
Melissa, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Melissa>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Melissa. Love, Carol
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