The Pond

As life's energy swirls all around,
  Peace settles in my breast,
Sitting quiet and still,
  as turtles splash in and out of the water
    nearby,
And a playful otter giggles,
  waiting for a playmate to join in his fun.
The wind jogs around us all,
  giving the downy hair of a cattail a 
    piggyback into the peaceful wood.
White cotton clouds make their way,
  lazily across the sapphire sky,
Making sure not to disturb the
  brilliant sun,
Who's rays transform the rippling water into
  glittering diamonds before my eyes.
But before that beaming magician can perform 
  his magic again on the flat canvas before me,
The lonely otter splashes,
  announcing his departure
    and peaking his eyes in farewell.
As I too depart,
  I smile,
Feeling at one with nature.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 26, 2009 at 3:53 PM
This one has me smiling. I really like the uplifting end. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Melissa, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Melissa. Love, Carol
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September 23, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Very lovely, Melissa. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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September 22, 2009 at 7:53 PM
Melissa, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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September 22, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Melissa>>James
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September 21, 2009 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Melissa. Love, Carol
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