Premiere Contest WinnerThe Poisonous Parrot

A parrot sits on my shoulder.
Unlike those that squawk, mine tends to whine.
When she is in the mood,
she moans and moans and moans.
No Polly-Anna Parrot is this one!
My pain she keeps repeating,
and hearing of it hinders me from being 
more completely sympathetic to the pain 
of others in my life.
As she dribbles cracker crumbs of pessimissm
from her annoying and ugly noxious beak,
it’s so difficult to pluck her from my ear.
Alas! I’m hearing the sound of my own voice,
for ‘tis I - who taught her how to speak.

Jan. 20, 2019 for 
Maureen McGreavy's Plucking the Poisonous Parrot Contest
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Jayasankar Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Just came to read your old poems Andrea. Wow.. what great thoughts that gave you TOP win. My fav this one.. Hugs ~ Ani
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on this superb entry, Andrea,,,i see i have a lot of poetry of yours to read, but look forward to catching up one day..
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Andrea.
Awtry Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:35 AM
“Cracker crumbs of pessimism”... and that last line! Well done! Congratulations :)
Doll Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win , Andrea. Well done. All the best~ Warren
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:35 AM
This is so good... I feel like I'm getting into character every time I read this one. Awesome job Andrea! Congratulations on your first place win! And thank you :))) xomo!
May Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea well deserved my friend
Agustin Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Congrats... I really admire the grand "Andreanic" way you present your piece. God bless you.
Mitra Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Andrea , this is so much perfect to the theme announced...the most deserving to be placed at the top.. A big sincere applause from my side. keep winning our hearts
Leiser Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Wonderful and insightful verse, with great rhythm and flow, Andrea! Congrats on your well deserved top win! :)
Godwin Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Congratulations! I bet you even followed form and contest rules - yay, Andrea, I'm tickled for you. Love ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 6:26 PM
By the way, your poem is super clever - I forgot to mention the poem! What a day.
Brown  Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Wonderful write with excellent descriptions of the bird. Congratulations a deserved top place.
Y. Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:33 PM
WoW! Andrea, No wonder you're in the top spot. You nailed this challenge hands down. I think I have such a parrot too( imaginary). I have to tell her to shut up! Excellent job. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:56 PM
wow, i am amazed. I haven't got a trophy win on a recent poem for a long time!! thanks for letting me know!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Yay Andrea! Congratulations on your trophy win! Parrots do sound identical to their owners voice it is true. Outstanding! My daughter has an African grey parrot who has over a thousand word vocabulary and it is about seven years old. xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Excellent!! Enjoyed this, Andrea:-)...
Vaso Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 10:59 PM
That's so funny!!!
Messina Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:22 PM
This is great, Andrea. I love the last line, you hit home with that. Best wishes for a win in the contest. :)
Hinshaw Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 5:50 PM
I predict another lst Place win for this very insightful verse, Andrea - best of luck in the contest. thx for taking time to look at the While America Sleeps write. I should have worked in the write somehow that America had better wake up and stop bickering and get to work getting things done! Yes I served 30 years in the AF and was honored and privileged to do so. Best to you - Bob
Anish Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 11:19 AM
When you make your own bed you have to lie in it. Do you really have a parrot? I love birds. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Fairchild Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 3:33 AM
'Alas! I'm hearing the sound of my own voice, for 'tis I -- who taught her how to speak.' Truly, the worst enemy is within us. Ingenious!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Oh, yes! Those around us parrot us. Nicely done, Andrea!
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Wow a FAVE, Andrea. This is brilliant.
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Ha! We reap what we sow, Andrea :) An excellent take on this contest prompt. Best regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:10 PM
What a great punch line! Wasn't expecting that. Sure to win in the contest, Andrea. Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 1:59 PM
I enjoyed the read--the ending is true and cleverly done.
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