The Poisonous Parrot Premiere Contest Winner

A parrot sits on my shoulder.
Unlike those that squawk, mine tends to whine.
When she is in the mood,
she moans and moans and moans.
No Polly-Anna Parrot is this one!
My pain she keeps repeating,
and hearing of it hinders me from being 
more completely sympathetic to the pain 
of others in my life.
As she dribbles cracker crumbs of pessimissm
from her annoying and ugly noxious beak,
it’s so difficult to pluck her from my ear.
Alas! I’m hearing the sound of my own voice,
for ‘tis I - who taught her how to speak.

Jan. 20, 2019 for 
Maureen McGreavy's Plucking the Poisonous Parrot Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/28/2021 3:45:00 AM
Just came to read your old poems Andrea. Wow.. what great thoughts that gave you TOP win. My fav this one.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this superb entry, Andrea,,,i see i have a lot of poetry of yours to read, but look forward to catching up one day..
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:22:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:35:00 AM
“Cracker crumbs of pessimism”... and that last line! Well done! Congratulations :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win , Andrea. Well done. All the best~ Warren
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:35:00 AM
This is so good... I feel like I'm getting into character every time I read this one. Awesome job Andrea! Congratulations on your first place win! And thank you :))) xomo!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea well deserved my friend
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:49:00 PM
Congrats... I really admire the grand "Andreanic" way you present your piece. God bless you.
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Date: 1/27/2019 10:42:00 PM
Andrea , this is so much perfect to the theme announced...the most deserving to be placed at the top.. A big sincere applause from my side. keep winning our hearts
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Date: 1/27/2019 10:36:00 PM
Wonderful and insightful verse, with great rhythm and flow, Andrea! Congrats on your well deserved top win! :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations! I bet you even followed form and contest rules - yay, Andrea, I'm tickled for you. Love ... CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/27/2019 6:26:00 PM
By the way, your poem is super clever - I forgot to mention the poem! What a day.
Date: 1/27/2019 4:24:00 PM
Wonderful write with excellent descriptions of the bird. Congratulations a deserved top place.
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:33:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, No wonder you're in the top spot. You nailed this challenge hands down. I think I have such a parrot too( imaginary). I have to tell her to shut up! Excellent job. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/27/2019 3:56:00 PM
wow, i am amazed. I haven't got a trophy win on a recent poem for a long time!! thanks for letting me know!
Date: 1/27/2019 3:16:00 PM
Yay Andrea! Congratulations on your trophy win! Parrots do sound identical to their owners voice it is true. Outstanding! My daughter has an African grey parrot who has over a thousand word vocabulary and it is about seven years old. xxoo
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Date: 1/23/2019 3:30:00 PM
Excellent!! Enjoyed this, Andrea:-)...
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Date: 1/21/2019 10:59:00 PM
That's so funny!!!
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Date: 1/21/2019 6:22:00 PM
This is great, Andrea. I love the last line, you hit home with that. Best wishes for a win in the contest. :)
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Date: 1/21/2019 5:50:00 PM
I predict another lst Place win for this very insightful verse, Andrea - best of luck in the contest. thx for taking time to look at the While America Sleeps write. I should have worked in the write somehow that America had better wake up and stop bickering and get to work getting things done! Yes I served 30 years in the AF and was honored and privileged to do so. Best to you - Bob
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Date: 1/21/2019 11:19:00 AM
When you make your own bed you have to lie in it. Do you really have a parrot? I love birds. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/21/2019 3:33:00 AM
'Alas! I'm hearing the sound of my own voice, for 'tis I -- who taught her how to speak.' Truly, the worst enemy is within us. Ingenious!
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Date: 1/20/2019 7:36:00 PM
Oh, yes! Those around us parrot us. Nicely done, Andrea!
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Date: 1/20/2019 6:51:00 PM
Wow a FAVE, Andrea. This is brilliant.
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Date: 1/20/2019 2:18:00 PM
Ha! We reap what we sow, Andrea :) An excellent take on this contest prompt. Best regards // paul
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Date: 1/20/2019 2:10:00 PM
What a great punch line! Wasn't expecting that. Sure to win in the contest, Andrea. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:59:00 PM
I enjoyed the read--the ending is true and cleverly done.
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