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The Point of No Return

Sixteen year old sweethearts, in her house all alone; Her father still at work, her mother not at home; Kissing they had tried; leaving hickies on their necks; Petting body parts, they would venture onto next. TV providing light in her otherwise dark playroom; Anticipation and fear, the young couple both consume. Zippers unzip; not sure of what they might find, “Stop”; “Keep on going”; playing ping-pong in their mind. Touching other’s body parts; enjoying where they are touched; Worried that they may be liking it a little bit too much. Conscience of each other breathing deeper as they explore, Also listening carefully for the closing of a car door. Bodies start to entwine, venturing further then they had thought; Biology they learned in school but this topic had not been taught. How to stop once you’ve gone this far is a lesson hard to learn, As this high school sweetheart couple reach the point of no return. Clumsily they manage to get through their first time; Pleasure, pain and guilt feelings make a mixture quite sublime. Quietly they get dressed as they hear her Mom walk in the door, Both of them wondering if they’ll ever do this any more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 4:14:00 AM
Congrats Joe on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:42:00 AM
A universal memory here! You really nailed this one Joe! I jumped up in the dark ran into the concrete pole and chipped a front tooth ;) Light & Love & Congrad's
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:29:00 PM
congratulations in the plaxment Joe.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:24:00 PM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry ... u sure made the point in your awesome lines.. enjoy another great success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congrats, Joe. Great write. Enjoyed. Ralph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joe
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:07:00 AM
One of your very best Joe .. good luck in the contest .. amazing presentation my friend..
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