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The Poet's Ache

I ache for the dream that a child has Hope for the gifts from the Santa Clause Wake to the words with awesome pizzazz And twist my lines in a string of jazz. I ache for my share of tender love Like the gentle lift of a flying dove Hold my thoughts in a random pause And weave them into a poetic applause. I ache for my share of health and wealth Ride on the wings of my family's strength Let my vibes explore the globe And rise my work into eternal scope. I ache for the shores of a wonderland Spin my life into a musical band Let my stanzas escape the bound And embrace the joy of holding the crown. I ache for the wings of a freedom bird Fly on the arch of wisdom words Bind my ballad of intellectual coterie And master the art of beautiful poetry. August 3, 2017

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Date: 5/19/2024 9:03:00 AM
I especially like the last stanza. Aching for freedom like a bird then wanting master beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 9/10/2022 6:58:00 AM
"I ache for the wings of a freedom bird Fly on the arch of wisdom words Bind my ballad of intellectual coterie And master the art of beautiful poetry"..... You have indeed mastered the art of beautiful poetry and your ache for perfection takes you to higher and higher levels. Simply beautiful, Vijay !
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Date: 10/2/2018 3:12:00 PM
stunning work i found way back here, Vijay. It's very passionate writing from you.
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Vijay. It shines throughout. This is my personal fave of the poem of yours I've read thus far. It is a jewel embroidered tapestry of poetry. So very beautiful to read. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/17/2017 11:26:00 AM
beautifully written. thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Karen--I really did enjoy--I have you on my favorite poet list.
Date: 8/14/2017 10:31:00 PM
Oh so wonderfully worded and so relatable. I love your line 'Let my vibes explore the globe' I can just feel the wanderlust of it! A great poem Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Susan--love the detailed insight!
Date: 8/5/2017 7:33:00 AM
Brilliant work Vijay! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/5/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 8/4/2017 12:45:00 PM
I also ache for the freedom....lovely rhyme dear Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thanks. You do great work.
Date: 8/4/2017 10:16:00 AM
Beautifully said, profoundly felt. Resonance for resilience. Thanks much.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 12:20:00 PM
Many thanks. Like the sentiment in your poems on politics.
Date: 8/4/2017 7:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Very well written. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Heidi. I am a fan, love your creativity!
Date: 8/3/2017 1:56:00 PM
Wonderful write Vijay! Your turn of phrase is exquisite! :) xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Maureen for your kind words of encouragement!

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