Unseeking Seeker Poet Dizain

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The Poems I Never Wrote

When attention is soft and heart mellow,
the sounds of silence oft invades our form,
pervading presence, igniting soul's glow,
felt vividly as blissful currents warm.
Vaporised self's swept away in this storm,
shaping in our head words sent from heaven
but if we take this boon as a given,
the music slips through fissures in our mind;
thus unless the void remains our haven,
these gifts from beyond we must leave behind.

07-October-2022

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Sam Kauffman October 20, 2022 at 10:09 AM "Fissures in our mind," "void remains our haven" just two of your amazing images of the "gifts" left behind Seeker! What a wonderful description of the poems we leave behind - maybe permanently and, just maybe, waiting for a resurrection of sorts. I always come away from your poems with bundles of thoughts to ponder. Thank you for that gift. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Unseeking Seeker October 20, 2022 at 6:42 PM Thank you dear Sam ~ your kind comments are so overwhelming! :)

Ann Peck October 15, 2022 at 1:56 PM Beautiful thoughts, Seeker. Yes, we must be grateful, and also quick to write them lest we forget! Unseeking Seeker October 15, 2022 at 7:14 PM Yes, since attention oscillates :)

Michelle Faulkner October 15, 2022 at 12:46 PM Love the wistfulness of gifts we must leave behind, congratulations on your win- Unseeking Seeker October 15, 2022 at 7:13 PM Thank you Michelle ~ all that is, is a wave in the vast ocean of consciousness

Andy Chunn October 15, 2022 at 12:44 PM Congratulations on the win. Those "words sent from heaven" are sometimes nebular at best. Nicely done. Unseeking Seeker October 15, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Andy

Sotto Poet October 15, 2022 at 10:29 AM Congratulations on your win in his contest, dear friend. You amply deserve it with your greatly penned poem. Unseeking Seeker October 15, 2022 at 10:53 AM Thank you, Sotto!

Constance La France October 15, 2022 at 9:42 AM Seeker, a wonderful Dizain poem and fitting for Craig's theme, congratulations on your win in his contest, blessings Constnce Unseeking Seeker October 15, 2022 at 10:52 AM Thanks Constance! Never expected to be on the winners list

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2022 at 10:49 PM I'm sure we will see them posted some day. Unseeking Seeker October 7, 2022 at 12:47 AM As the old adage goes ~ we cannot cross the same river twice