The Poem In the Mind-2

The poem in the mind

There is  only  enough space in my mind
For just a poem and there you I find
Can’t think of another thing
My mind singing what you sing
To all else except you I’m rather blind.

I know you are an involved mom of six
And what toll it takes bringing up those chicks
On your spirit and body
Your life was never gaudy
But the essence of such a  gracious mix.

Adorable are your traits which are rare
Attributes, six, are your  children so fair
They are love, care and beauty
Passion, power and frailty
Here’s  the perfect woman beyond compare.


@ 23 feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Entry for PD's contest on 5 mar 13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/24/2014 11:21:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita
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Date: 3/13/2013 8:50:00 PM
This was very nice and I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:17:00 PM
Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Well done. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:38:00 PM
JAG, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:23:00 AM
this is so sweet. It sounds like you are doing a tribute for your wife here!! Do you really have six children?? When you said "your" six children , it sounds as if the children do not belong to you, only to her. So I was curious!!
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:55:00 AM
You always have enjoyable poems to share, Jag. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:01:00 AM
thanks for sharing that greatly flow of emotion.
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:51:00 AM
What beautiful words of loving someone. Very nice read.
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