The Poem, a Poem

A poem is
           poem of multiple essence.
           A bird's hoot,
           a fecund instant,
           flash of inspiration ...
           A lamb bleat
           before the sacrifice,
           a childhood cry
           before the blowjob
           A fallen petal,
           a note between notes
           a drummer that  plays
           feasting the glory ...
           It is the awakening of the dawn
           releasing the apotheosis
           of this flame that does not die ...
           It is an angel without wings in the earth,

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Date: 5/8/2019 10:27:00 PM
WOW Alkas I think we could talk about this one for a long tine while drinking Porto and eating cheese. A multifaceted diamond but still in the rough of possabilaties. I would certainly start with your lines about how a petal falls becomes off beat beats. Simply lovely, but so very true. The music of life; and yet the other phrases raise other thoughts that between you and I, I think we would finish the wine. Salute Alkas!!! To you!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/11/2019 2:57:00 AM
Jeff's possibilities are many, they would not be exhausted in a simple poem. Every fact or event is worthy of making poetry, we have much more to do. Here it is simply the observation of a poet about things he realized. at the time; Wine and cheese make beautiful fondue!
Date: 5/8/2019 5:34:00 PM
Hello my dear friend Alkas poetry, A poem is al you said it should be. Is it hot in Brazil now? It is Spring here but still cold. The buds are showing on the trees now. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/8/2019 6:31:00 PM
Hi, dear Darlene, thank you for commenting... it is extremely hot these days in my town. I live close to Recife, Northeast of Brazil. Have a good night my dear friend, salute alkas
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