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The poem that I write today Has always been a thought away. But do I think of trees, or birds, As I slyly meter out my words? Or do I think of spring, or fall, Of summertime, the sea and all? Perhaps it is a moon-rinsed night That prods me so to sit and write-- Or it could be a drop of rain, If not some nagging doubt, or pain. What drives my pen to wander so, To touch the sky; the earth below? Of all the thoughts, both old and new-- I ponder most the thought of you. And so the poet takes his pen... Writes words of love, and falls again! --Mel

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Date: 1/29/2015 3:31:00 AM
Mel, when I read a book of love poems, it is this kind of poem I am hoping to read, one that expresses the inner feelings in a poet's heart. Your poem is a magnificent example of what I am speaking of. It is brilliant and going into my Fav's. 7+ for me!
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/29/2015 1:54:00 PM
How very sweet. Thank you Connie! I have an interested publisher, and I writing towards a submission--next month, or two. Input like yours is helpful as I prepare to put my poets out there, so to speak. Thanks for the read and wonderful feedback...xxx...Mel
Date: 1/27/2015 9:41:00 AM
I love how you did that Mel...A perfect discription of how a poem comes to be...take care Ana
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/29/2015 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Ana. I appreciate your kind words. I am working on a book, and have an interested publisher, so we'll see. Hugs xo Mel
Date: 1/17/2015 11:06:00 PM
What I absolutely love about your work is the seamless way you write....There are no pauses, no...flaws...anywhere. I have as yet to find something that didn't flow absolutely perfectly, Mel. I'm not being superfluous in my praise, just honest. Love this piece.
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/19/2015 9:24:00 PM
How sweet of you. Thank you for reading this, and for your honest and encouraging assessment. I surely appreciate it my dear...hugs...Mel

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