The Plum Tree

The mothers spread a plum stained blanket
under the tree,
and lay the babies down,
patting their backs.
They listen for the sch,
dedh, t-te sounds 
of plums dropping through leaves 
and hitting the ground around them.
Then they stand 
and gather up the ones-
Soft, some slightly split, bursting- 
The perfect ones and eat them,
plum juice staining their mouths
and fingers.
They laugh
and spit the pits away,
like the boys do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sambourne Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 9:21 PM
Wonderful imagery of fecundity in your delightful poem, Douglas. The final lines are zingers. You superbly unite mothers + free wheeling boys in their plum-commonality. Be well. Brian
Brown Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Thanks so much Brian! Doug
Fenn Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 9:45 AM
What a fun poem!
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