The Planets Part Two
(iv)
We were half-way to Iowa and lethargy was not far
behind us. He had a late start but we all know lethargy
is a health freak and would never drink 64 oz frozen
soda-pops which means he doesn’t have to stop
and pee so often. I was getting nervous because
it seemed everytime you blinked it would take
longer and longer for you to open your eyes again.
So you told me about Mercury, the winged Messenger
and how he was so swift and lithe and angelic.
You were seriously regretting cashing in that
favor with the war Bringer because you thought
that maybe you could have asked him to get
Mercury to pick us up and fly right over I-35
traffic all the way through Missouri’s unengaging
landscape. If only that clerk had said you’re welcome.
(v)
As we finally crossed into Osceola, you introduced
your favorite planet Neptune. You said he was a
mystic and for half a dollar he could tell me how I
would die and I said that I’d rather save the half
a dollar to buy a gumball and watch the pink
or blue or yellow orb roll down the runway
until it hit the metal door of the dispenser with a clink.
I remember you laughed at that. I remember that your
stories would shrink the miles and the hours down
into manageable parts until the eighteen hour road trip
ended in Des Moines and you said, exhausted,
(vi)
Saturn was the bringer of Old Age but that you
hypothesized if we stayed in the car and just
kept driving that Saturn would just get tired
and leave us alone so we packed up and took
the nearest exit for the Yukon Territory. You
looked beautiful then, basking in Saturn’s rage
and you still haven’t aged a damn day.
Copyright © C.W. Bryan | Year Posted 2023
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