The Planets Part One
after Gustav Holst
Do you remember when you told me that story
of all the Planets in the sky and how they all
had different jobs and had different people they
were in charge of?
(i)
In the first hour of our road trip, when the first 30
minutes had passed into silence, you said
that Uranus was a magician and he was friends with
all the squirrels and mice and kindly rodents
of the forest. They would climb on his shoulders
or eat pieces of hard, white cheese out of his wrinkled
hands. You said it was Heaven on Earth to be
a rodent in Uranus’s company because as soon
as the cheese ran out, Uranus would open up a little
black book and cast a brand new dairy-oriented spell.
(ii)
We had to take our first pit stop 2 hours into the trip
because you hate eating breakfast right when you wake
up and your stomach was starting to interrupt your
stories. The checkout clerk didn’t laugh at your 9 a.m.
jokes and didn’t even bother to say you’re welcome
after your second, emphatic thank you. When you
closed the car door with all your strength you told
me the story of Mars, the bringer of War and how
he owed you a favor. You would send him in to shake
all the racks of snacks until they fell on the floor,
or to steal all the mustard packets from the roller
grill. I told you that wasn’t fair to the other patrons
and in your infinite kindness, relented and took
a great big sip of your 64 oz frozen soda-pop.
(iii)
The road stretched out before us in a long, black
and yellow runway. 64 ozs later we had to stop
again. It was my turn to drive, which meant it was
your turn to play the music. The sun was hiding
behind the clouds like your little niece behind
your sister’s skirts at family reunions so you played
a few somber, sullen tunes to mimic the day.
An hour into my driving stint the sun grew more
and more confident, daring to peek around the
cumulonimbus skirt and shed a little light for
our humble journey. The music became joyous,
upbeat yet serene. And you: you became
inspired, telling me that Venus, the bringer
of Peace sent the sun to light our way and break
the melancholy landscape into transcendental
scenes, as she had done for you a million times before.
Copyright © C.W. Bryan | Year Posted 2023
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