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The Planets-Mercury

Children running, playing, laughing, and admiring the skies; blue, white, and yellow daylight enchant their young eyes. Scattering like little insects when the one child yells: READY OR NOT HERE I COME! Hearts racing at the fill of excitement, giving exhilaration to there small scurried feet. Show casing their not so pearly whites to the birds and bees; who are thankful for their use of wings, to not be bothered by these large, young, quick, and naive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 12:39:00 PM
Hey, Jessica, nice write in this one. Thanks for reading and leaving your comment on my poem...As usual when you type as fast as I do you make mistakes...I meant to click on MonoRhyme...not Monoku..thnx for calling my attention to it, friend! Peace, Audrey
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