The Pipe

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The Pipe
(irrigation)

I am a city girl, 
I have never,
until now…

Ridden a horse across the desert, 
held a tarantula for longer than…
five minutes, 
used an incubator to raise chickens,
helped keep track of puppies (twice),
cut tails and sewed them like material. 
keep fish in a pond, raised just to eat,
and my garden is not organic, 
it is simply blessed.
I bought, fixed and "care for"..., 
my Own John Deere…Riding Tractor. 

This is not a boast. 

I have crawled under houses, 
into attics, painted barns and chased a PIG!
The rooster would not quit crowing. 
The altogether too close neighbor did the same.
Oh…
and the rain was coming down
in the middle of the front room, 
inside. 

While on the outside…

I, was knee-deep in water. 
Not from above, although he lent a hand. 
The corner of the yard. That mysterious place.
Behind a tree, a stump and two bushes. 
It came from there, like the flood of Noah. 
Now a gaping hole, where the river came to visit. 
Fast and slow, in and out everywhere. 
The middle of the night…

The top and I, do battle. 
Cold and merciless… I shake, freezing. 
I will win. Stop the gush, in a rush. 
I am a city girl…
But I am a warrior.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/19/2019 4:58:00 PM
Hello Ann you are a city girl but you will win the battle. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2019 12:41:00 PM
Hello Ann Foster,thank you for the tiny elves bringing me flowers made from icing. I love it!! ...Have a nice day my friend.
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/19/2019 8:56:00 PM
I am not alone. The Big Guy upstairs helps every day 24/7 or I would not put my feet to the floor in the morning... :) (tiny happy elves, bring you flowers made of frosting...) Ann
Date: 8/18/2019 6:44:00 PM
Most women are somehow like water, their shapes need to be given by the containers holding them...
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/18/2019 7:56:00 PM
I love your incredible analogy... thank you for your kind thoughts. Ann
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/18/2019 7:55:00 PM
Crystal...spun glass heated to its breaking point, colored by flowers pressed together for their gifts... whirling in the flame, surrounded by the heat provided. What shape could hold the wind?, slow the storm, or bring safe harbor to a vessel made of dreams? (I need to give up coffee...) Ann
Date: 8/18/2019 2:16:00 PM
I swear you were a country girl...but you are city warrior...Always like your vibes...Nice write
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/18/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so kindly. You have very cool comments indeed. Ann (the small plant on the desk dreams of the forest when no one is looking).
Date: 8/18/2019 5:17:00 AM
You really take the reader there... great lines that bring it to life... great poetry..
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/18/2019 3:07:00 PM
Humbly...thank you, friend. You have the nicest things to say. (sunflowers in spring, early in the day) Ann
Date: 8/17/2019 6:40:00 PM
Ann, I like this poem of rain and river deluge. I also like driving an old tractor. Allison Chalmers, Massey Ferguson, and Fords. -Richard
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Ann Foster
Date: 8/18/2019 3:06:00 PM
I was so proud the day my tractor came on the trailer out front. I had no idea how to even back it off the carrier. Wow. So fun. Irrgation has no care as to weather...it comes when it comes, it is your time. :) Splash splash... Ann
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