The Pine

The brook babbles. Journeying off to its destination with little care for the world about it.  White beards form over its banks like a thousand wise men coming to watch it's voyage. There, in the depths of winter, crystal formations cling from branches and bow as the trees stand in stone silence.  Only the crackle of the glass that encases everything, speaks its mind.

The pine alone is set apart. She this eve is dressed in white lacing, covering the green of her usual garment. Wearing her diamonds on every outstretched slender finger. The wind speaks in thin veiled suggestions to her. She whispers and moves in reply. Their's is a slow dance of seduction ignored in the broader scheme. 

The wind, were it capable, would strip her bare. However, unlike others so easily coaxed into disrobing, she is purity.  She is a woman of class and reform. Aging for no one but herself, stresses for none but herself.... She is refinement and grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/9/2024 4:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Jesse. Nicely done!
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Date: 8/11/2017 12:39:00 PM
I like your style and topics. I was brought here by the woodsman. My own chest let out a deep breath wondering what I would ever do. My kids and I spend a lot of time in the woods and country. It's a safe place, but mother nature holds all of our attention.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 9/21/2017 12:22:00 AM
The woodsman was hard to write, I wrote it from a place of wondering what one must face at losing a child. But too, I'd known a family who lost a child in such a way. The pine however, bit of a make up for the more heart-tugging poem.
Date: 11/16/2016 7:30:00 PM
Wow, Jesse, I love the picture you've painted here, love the metaphors... I absolutely love that final stanza... wowwww... soooo nice.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 11/17/2016 11:01:00 AM
lol You nailed it, in the sweetest way.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 11/17/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thank you, Becca. I was trying to find a sneaky way of saying pine trees don't lose needles like every other tree in the winter. guess I hit it head on.
Date: 11/4/2016 1:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very creative work..It contains some good metaphors..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 11/6/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Sara, always glad to hear your thoughts!
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