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The Pikake Shell Lei-W

No Niihau friend
To see forbidden Aden
Where the time stands still

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Fourth Placement
Contest: Tropical Treasures

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:05:00 AM

SWEET

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/18/2010 6:59:00 AM

Congrats from me too on your win with this Haiku, Dr. Ram! Great write and thank you for your recent comments! If you'd like have alook at my facebook albums, too. Have a nice week ahead...Gert

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/16/2010 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations!!!!!! You write beautifully with each word explaining huge!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/12/2010 1:03:00 AM

congratulatins on your win, this is superb Harry

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/11/2010 4:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:54:00 PM

Big congrats on your contest success, Dr. Ram. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your win with this dandy. Love, Joyce

Amy Green

Date: 7/11/2010 12:01:00 PM

OOOhh.. outstanding! Very much enjoyed.

Date: 7/11/2010 10:24:00 AM

Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on placing fourth in the Tropical Treasures contest. Keep on writing. I wish you ongoing success. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Dr. Ram! Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations, Dr Ram. On you poem's place. agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:02:00 AM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this amazing write from the vacation photos... thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 8:11:00 AM

Oh, I like this one, Dr. Ram. Unique and thought-provoking approach to the contest. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2010 7:19:00 AM

Oh, what a different and wonderful view of these islands. This will be the eye catcher poem in the contest...so unique! Well done, and creative. Good luck in the contest!~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2010 4:59:00 PM

Great write that you have penned in this one..Let your gift of poetry flow onto the pages of soup where we all can enjoy your gift..Sara

Date: 7/10/2010 12:38:00 PM

What an interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/10/2010 12:30:00 PM

I guess I don't know what that is well written though.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/10/2010 11:23:00 AM

Awesome write, Dr Ram. Nice job. Thanks for your comments. Good luck. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 10:36:00 AM

Thankxxx for supporting my Haiku contest Dr. Ram with this beauty ... so unique.. thankxxx dear friend.. am finally home.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2010 9:12:00 AM

Where time stands still. That is a cool line, Dr. Ram. I need to brush up on the lingo of Hawaii. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/10/2010 8:43:00 AM

Very nice, Dr. Mehta, Time does stand still in a small secluded place like Niihau. And it is definitely a great environment to emulate in gardens around the world (Are you referring to the garden in Adana, Turkey?) The Hawaiian island might be as beautiful as the Garden of Eden where time seemed to stand still during the period of immortality. One could only imagine. Nice haiku for Linda Marie's contest. Smiles, Dane Ann

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