The Pigeon

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a pigeon in the rain upon a windy wet ledge cooing, he smooths his feathers and tucks his head for a rest with not a care for wind or rain- oh, I wish for that kind of tranquility . . . _____________________ May 16, 2022 Poetry/Free verse/the pigeon Copyright Protected, ID 05-145-892-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem, No 44 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 05/26/2022 Honorable Mention

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:21:00 PM

Lovely ~ yes indeed, we all wish for that inner peace, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2022 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. He needs a raincoat. Oh yes, tranquility. Love it. Have a great/blessed day......................

Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2022 2:57:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/26/2022 9:34:00 PM

"I wish for that kind of tranquility" - Truly a nature's child. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2022 6:14:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the nice comment and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/16/2022 4:28:00 PM

Oh, I do love pigeons. But I suspect you knew that already. This poem is adorable, and I can feel the truth in it, they truly are incredibly hardy and tranquil little creatures. My best to you in the contest! xomo

Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2022 7:50:00 AM

Maureen, thank you so much for the compliment, I love pigeons too (though some call them pests) I love the cooing, and the color patterns, truly are tranquil and thanks for the encouragement, blessings ~ Constance

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/16/2022 4:00:00 PM

His coloring is a lovely as your lines, Constance. Soup mail.

Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2022 7:51:00 AM

Jenna, thank you so much for the compliment, yes the coloring of this pigeon in the image is so beautiful, blessings ~Constance