The Pieman's Naughty Daughter

Simple Simon whistled, when he pricked his finger on a thistle, 
And the pieman had whistled too. 
Because the penny that Simon gave to the pieman,
Was a penny all shiny and new

The pieman threw the penny into the pail of water. 
In hopes that he'd find himself a buck 
But the pieman's naughty daughter, dipped her hand in the water
Stole the penny and ran away, yelling...Good Luck! 


Complex Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Julia Ward 
1/19/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 2/23/2022 5:19:00 PM
What can he pieman do now? She's run away! Lol. Good one Charles!
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:38:00 PM
G'day Charlies ... just goes to show. There's more than one way to be a naughty daughter - very good Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:12:00 AM
Hmmm...well, it didn't go where I thought it was going, but it was clever and funny, Charlie. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/19/2022 4:57:00 AM
I have to admit that with your title, I was expecting the naughty daughter to be doing something quite different with Simon! Very cute Charlie! Good luck in the contest !!
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:32:00 AM
Very funny and clever Charlie! E joyed. Debx
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:28:00 AM
Very naughty. :) One must excuse youth.
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