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12/21/2019 - F G I  Blog Series 10 parody, Brian Strand, sponsor

12/08/2018
~3rd Place (shared)~ Punny Pies Contest, sponsored by Michelle Faulkner
Thanks, Michelle!


My kitchen time ending, dishes drying in stacks My family is telling me it’s time to relax In the background are voices urging me to stay So I pause, wait and listen for one more lovely thing That my friends and family might say... My kitchen is filled, with the smell of fresh pie Made year after year, from old and new recipes The air fills my lungs, with the smell of fresh pie My mouth wants to eat every pie it sees My mouth wants to eat like the child Who experiences pie the first time in their life My mouth wants to savor fresh aroma of pie From the oven before cut by the knife To boldly eat pie like the person who won't Let calories get in their way To eat, through the night, and Be ready for more the next day I go to my kitchen when I’m good and hungry I know I will eat, like I have before My kitchen is blessed with the smell of fresh pie And I’ll eat one more!

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Date: 12/30/2018 3:19:00 PM
Love how you put the picture with this one as well. I chose pie theme but did not enter mine in time. Congrats for your win with this lip-smacking gem!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/30/2018 4:48:00 PM
Andrea, even though you didn't submit it in time, I can see it, smell it, feel it and taste it :) Be it apple, pumpkin and spice, meringue or cheesecake, it's a wonderful pie! It makes me want to dance the Merengue! ~Mark
Date: 12/28/2018 2:42:00 PM
12/08/2019 Michelle Faulkner’s Punny Pies Contest ~placed third -12/16/2018 ~ Thanks, Michelle!
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:43:00 PM
CONGRATS, Mark! Janice
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! ~Mark
Date: 12/17/2018 2:01:00 PM
Love and holidays go together hand in hand, so does pies and happiness, A lovely entry dear Mark congrats on your win, Merry Christmas xo
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
You are very kind, Pixie Dust :) Thank you for your encouragement and well wishes. ~Mark
Date: 12/16/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mark. Well done.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/16/2018 4:23:00 PM
You were the only one who went with 'The Pie of Music', so glad you did, also like you went with the tempo of the song! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:28:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for such a fun contest and for my placement :) Your themes were brilliant! ~Mark
Date: 12/8/2018 5:47:00 AM
Your take on the theme made me smile. I'll always think of pies when I hear the song from the film lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/8/2018 7:48:00 AM
What a pun contest! Jan, thank you for your delightful comment :) ~Mark

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