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12/21/2019 - F G I  Blog Series 10 parody, Brian Strand, sponsor

12/08/2018
~3rd Place (shared)~ Punny Pies Contest, sponsored by Michelle Faulkner
Thanks, Michelle!

Inspired by The Sound of Music, composed by Richard Rogers with lyrics by Oscar Hammerstein.


The Pie of Music

My kitchen time ending, dishes drying in stacks
My family is telling me it’s time to relax
In the background are voices urging me to stay
So I pause, wait and listen for one more lovely thing
That my friends and family might say...

My kitchen is filled, with the smell of fresh pie
Made year after year, from my best recipes
The air fills my lungs, with the smell of fresh pie
My mouth wants to eat every pie it sees

My mouth wants to eat like the child 
Who experiences pie the first time in their life
My mouth wants to savor fresh aroma of pie 
From the oven before cut by the knife
To boldly eat pie like the person who won't
Let calories get in their way
To eat, through the night, and
Be ready for more the next day

I go to my kitchen when I’m good and hungry
I know I will eat, like I have before 
My kitchen is blessed with the smell of fresh pie
And I’ll eat one more!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/30/2018 3:19:00 PM
Love how you put the picture with this one as well. I chose pie theme but did not enter mine in time. Congrats for your win with this lip-smacking gem!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/30/2018 4:48:00 PM
Andrea, even though you didn't submit it in time, I can see it, smell it, feel it and taste it :) Be it apple, pumpkin and spice, meringue or cheesecake, it's a wonderful pie! It makes me want to dance the Merengue! ~Mark
Date: 12/28/2018 2:42:00 PM
12/08/2019 Michelle Faulkner’s Punny Pies Contest ~placed third -12/16/2018 ~ Thanks, Michelle!
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:43:00 PM
CONGRATS, Mark! Janice
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! ~Mark
Date: 12/17/2018 2:01:00 PM
Love and holidays go together hand in hand, so does pies and happiness, A lovely entry dear Mark congrats on your win, Merry Christmas xo
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 4:48:00 PM
You are very kind, Pixie Dust :) Thank you for your encouragement and well wishes. ~Mark
Date: 12/16/2018 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mark. Well done.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/17/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/16/2018 4:23:00 PM
You were the only one who went with 'The Pie of Music', so glad you did, also like you went with the tempo of the song! Congratulations on your win!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/16/2018 9:28:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for such a fun contest and for my placement :) Your themes were brilliant! ~Mark
Date: 12/8/2018 5:47:00 AM
Your take on the theme made me smile. I'll always think of pies when I hear the song from the film lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/8/2018 7:48:00 AM
What a pun contest! Jan, thank you for your delightful comment :) ~Mark
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