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All day the world has waited
for me to come and rest here,
to welcome me into a picture
it has composed with people 
walking their dogs along 
the water's edge and the wide,
seaweed strewn beach bathed
in the soft light of a setting sun.

‘See what I have prepared’
it seems to say, drawing my eye
to the distant clouds, the water
wearing a golden glaze 
and creased by a gentle breeze,
birds overhead, the sand scored
in a joyous language written
by children's scampering feet.

I sit and take it in,
feast on the exquisite detail
that is layered and worked into
every inch of the scene. 
Memory gives it a name as light
fades and I leave, re-entering 
the dark that is waiting for me
just beyond the frame.

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Date: 5/29/2024 1:27:00 PM
Such a magnificent poem! It resonated deeply with me, especially since I’ve just returned from a beach stroll where the scenery perfectly mirrored the imagery in your lines. You’ve articulated it wonderfully, Paul!
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/2/2024 3:57:00 AM
Forgive me dear Smita fot not replying to your comments before this, oversight on my behalf I'm afraid, apologies. So plesed to receive your positive words and that the poem found resonance in a shared experience, a stroll along the beach. Sincere thanks for taking the time to read and offer yr thoughts. Kind regards, Paul
Date: 5/2/2024 6:29:00 PM
I see you certainly haven't lost your touch. Splendid poetry as usual Paul. You never disappoint. Reading you lines is never a waste of time. I pray all is well with you.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/3/2024 5:57:00 AM
Hi Daniel...good to hear from you. Thanyou for your positive words my friend. Still managing to coax a few tunes out of this old instrument, need to be a bit sparing in how I treat it....showing its age. All the best....
Date: 5/2/2024 2:37:00 PM
And l was right there with you Paul…Ha! Another Paul beauty!! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thanks Deb....appreciate your comments and spending some time in the picture...take care my friend.
Date: 4/26/2024 8:44:00 AM
Dear Paul, What a wonderful reflection on the beauty and transience of moments captured in time. I love the serenity and wonder. Yes, we need to appreciate the intricate details of life's beauty. This is an exquisite piece that is filled with the essence of being present in the moment. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/28/2024 5:50:00 AM
Daniel, your ability to read ( and indeed write ) poetry and offer such informed comment is exceptional and greatly valued my friend. The support you give matters to me, a return signal from 'out there' that carries understanding and a generous spirit. I thank you sincerely.
Date: 4/26/2024 7:13:00 AM
Paul, I don't think I've ever read water ripples described as creases, but to me... that's the kind of line that draws me to read your excellent poetry. Never mundane, you not only write lines that are outside the box, but also unwrap them as if they are gifts to your readers. I find them of great value.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/28/2024 5:40:00 AM
Hi Lin...your generous comments and kindness are deeply appreciated. That you read my poetry and value it for the reasons stated polishes the pride of this old soul of mine..a vitamin pill to encourage ongoing effort. I am privileged to have you as a friend and fellow traveller. Always look forward to your company.
Date: 4/26/2024 3:38:00 AM
Once again, Paul a beautiful and eloquent poem that paints a picture even without the image (lovely by the way) you posted. This is my kind of poetry. This is my kind of moment too. May you discover many more, and if you share them, I will be right here. Blessings Sam :) x
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Date: 4/28/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thankyou Sam for your kind words and support. The feedback gives a lift to my confidence, reassurance that some of my little creations communicate the underlying sense of wonder and excitement that gave them birth....sincerely valued my friend.
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