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The Phoenix

She nested upon her self-made pyre preparing for another genesis in blaze hues of love and together they were a combustible fire She, the creature exquisitely forged by fire eternally existing within love's dimensions designed to mesmerize us, by swirling amber scarlet, and purple plumage with flecks of cobalt colors delicately dissolving amid the firelight shadows, a macabre dance her last love song Seemingly born to say goodbye and sweet is her demise this touch of heaven healing the wounded weeping eternal teardrops of Truth and beauty into hearts, selflessly with nothing to gain consuming pain all things made new And so it begins again and again as it ends... one of life's treasures never-ending hope, her sacrifice of love ____ 20 Titles From 20 Friends contest prompt: Another Genesis (M.L. Kiser) Blaze Hues of Love (Eve Roper) Together They Were a Combustible Fire (Caren Krutsinger) Forged by Fire (Line Gauthier) Love's Dimensions (Winged Warrior) Mesmerize Us (Gershon Wolf) Cobalt Colors (Connie Marcum Wong) A Macabre Dance (P.S. Autry) Last Love Song (Sherry Asbury) Born to Say Goodbye (Silent One) And Sweet is Her Demise (Andrea Dietrich) This Touch of Heaven (Arturo Michael) Weeping (Richard Lamoureaux) Eternal Teardrops (Michelle Faulkner) Truth and Beauty (Agnes Krampe) Nothing to Gain (Freddie Robinson Jr.) Consuming Pain (Maureen McGreavy) All Things (Charlene Bole) And So It Begins (Jan Allison) One of Life's Treasures (Old Buck)

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Date: 8/5/2019 9:15:00 PM
Wow! That was incredible! Well done and congratulations!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/6/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, M. L.! ;))
Date: 8/5/2019 5:58:00 AM
This deserved a podium finish! I had no idea you were posting poems again. Glad I figured it out today! Congratulations!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/6/2019 12:45:00 PM
Glad you found my newer stuff, your comments ALWAYS make my day!! ;D Thank you, Soul Sister!
Date: 8/3/2019 8:52:00 AM
My pleasure!
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your second place win.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/2/2019 9:08:00 PM
I am very honored.... Thank you SO much!! ;D
Date: 8/1/2019 6:49:00 PM
Well done Rhona! Congrats on you win. Charlie
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/1/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! ;)
Date: 8/1/2019 6:23:00 PM
Many congratulations, Rhona, well earned!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/1/2019 10:02:00 PM
Aawww, thanks Michelle! ;)
Date: 8/1/2019 5:15:00 PM
Bravo, lovely poem with a mysterious aura. Congrats on your podium finish, Rhona. Thanks for using one of my poem titles.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/1/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! ;)
Date: 8/1/2019 3:45:00 PM
Wonderful uniting of these titles, to me it was seamless, congrats Rhona on a fine win!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/1/2019 9:23:00 PM
Thank you so much! ;)
Date: 8/1/2019 1:24:00 PM
- A pleasure to read this great writing made of titles, Rhona :) - Congratulations on your 2nd place on the winner list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 8/1/2019 9:21:00 PM
Thanks!! So glad you enjoyed it! ;) *hugs*
Date: 7/30/2019 1:22:00 PM
Like Nina, I didn't know it was for the contest until the end, you did a beautiful job with these, good luck in the contest!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 7/30/2019 11:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ;)
Date: 7/28/2019 2:18:00 PM
wow, capturing hope with all these beautiful titles. Thanks so much for including my title in with them all. Lovely message.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 7/28/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful line! ;) This was a fun challenge... so glad you liked the end result!

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