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The person I want to be

As part of earth that orbits yonder sun holding the universe in close embrace, if breath by breath I could imbibe God’s grace, divine entwined, slowly coming undone, recognising truth that we all are one, no puzzles would remain for me to lace. Surrendering egoic will at God’s feet, empowered to shape shift and bilocate, may being as such be my ordained fate, suffused with bliss mists that do not deplete, as a ray of His light, then thus complete, delighting as seeds of love pollinate. Such is the yearning of my heart’s desire, to transmute becoming the cosmic fire.

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Date: 10/17/2024 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a great ending. Love your line, "Surrendering egoic will at God’s feet,." Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.....................
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Date: 10/17/2024 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Paula dear
Date: 10/13/2024 12:55:00 AM
'recognising truth that we all are one' lovely thought dear poet. Knowing you by your poems & your profound thinking, I am sure you will reach your goal and be the person. Happy writing. congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/13/2024 1:49:00 AM
God bless, thank you, TCM, amen to your kind words of encouragement
Date: 10/12/2024 5:55:00 AM
Your sonnet flows and rhymes really well.. Congratulations for your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/12/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One :)
Date: 9/8/2024 7:23:00 AM
This is so beautiful and what a wonderful and sacred wish it is, if only many more would find that divine place and let go of ego, this world will be a better place. I especially love the lines “delighting as seeds of love pollinate. Such is the yearning of my heart’s desire, to transmute becoming the cosmic fire.” Beautiful! And heart warming! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/8/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, IE. Such is the journey for all of us, stages vary, blossoming is certain.

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