Allan Williams Poet Dodoitsu

The Perils of Camping

Sleeping in a tent at night
Zippered in cosy and warm
You and me then bugs take flight
In a cloud they swarm

They hover round choose their prey 
Your perfume means they bite me
In my sleeping bag I lay
then off to Dawn (P)

Allan Williams for Bite Me contest (as I am new I went for some else new Dawn Pulido)
9~4~2012

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Skat A January 31, 2016 at 8:50 PM ALLAN, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --

Holly Moore January 28, 2013 at 5:11 AM Congratulations!! Off to a great start...thanks for your comment on my "A Longing" poem...Have a great day!...xx Holly Moore

Jim Pemberton June 17, 2012 at 6:27 AM Thanks for sharing! Hope all is going well for you! Have a great day!!! JP

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 12:15 PM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Allan. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson April 14, 2012 at 9:33 PM Well done. Welcome to our fun center. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 9:05 PM Gosh, I hope Dawn did this too? That was sweet of you to include her. Congrats on your win.

Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:58 PM Allan!! Congrats on your win! well done! big hugs, love debs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:52 PM congrats Allan on your success in my contest with this super entry luv.. reminded me of my teenage days ..

Ivy Vresk April 9, 2012 at 12:04 PM you just made me wounder if I am ever do camping 'cause I don't like bugs, thank you though ,like your poem,Ivy