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September- 17- 2025

The Perfume Bottle Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Craig Cornish


 

The Perfume Bottle

 It was a gift from one I loved so dearly,
      wrapped in golden foil and tied with a bow, 
  a perfume vial, nay, joy bottled up in cut glass.

         When I applied it on me for the first time, it was heaven.
Its smell clung to every pore of my skin, dug deep into every sinew of me…
        a smell I loved so dearly, the smell that tickled my nostrils.
 
  The same was the scent, that permeated from him, 
         It graced every room and every corner he went.
  It lingered in the air, making his presence felt even after he left.

   Whenever I applied it on me, I could feel him close.

 Not sure, when a crack fell into our cemented relationship
    Silence began hanging heavy between us, his calls became less frequent.
       Days stretched in deepening silence and he stopped visiting me.

 I no longer had the mood to use the perfume any more
      and kept the bottle away, a souvenir of the love we had.
                    Now it stays on the mantelpiece-
      a sad reminder of the scent that once ensnared me!
   Whenever someone opens it, the fragrance spills out.

 Breathing in that luscious aroma, a nostalgic fever
        rushes over, flooding my mind like a river in spate. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/18/2025 7:12:00 AM
A poignant and beautifully woven piece, Valsa. The perfume becomes more than a fragrance,.it transforms into memory, longing, and love’s lingering presence. The bittersweet shift from joy to nostalgia is powerfully felt, leaving the reader moved by its quiet ache.
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Date: 9/18/2025 4:59:00 AM
Good you remember the love. Love is never wasted, when fragrance leads to fond recall. We change, others change...no one is to blame. Grateful to have loved and lost, than never loved at all.
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Date: 9/17/2025 8:28:00 PM
This story is a puzzle. What went wrong? I hope it ends with the lady moving on. May the future bring happiness.
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Date: 9/17/2025 6:02:00 PM
what captivating words that tell a beautiful story in your own unique poetic voice. Perfume has a way of lingering and your captured that idea outstandingly! hugs, Sara
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Date: 9/17/2025 10:19:00 AM
The perfume is not just an accessory: it becomes part of the lover, part of the speaker. The smell from him, the smell of the perfume, they become intertwined. When the love recedes, the perfume remains—and it holds more power over memory than the physical presence.
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Date: 9/17/2025 9:33:00 AM
Despite the painful loss of passion, your poetry evokes a wonderful ambiance. Excellent use of description and feeling. Strange that certain scents can trigger flashbacks. The affection that existed between the two has now withered away. Valsa, your feelings are entangled in this feud.
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Date: 9/17/2025 7:32:00 AM
Despite loss of love, your poem creates a great atmosphere. Loved the imagery and emotions. I can bear shaving lotion but I seem to be allergic to perfume. Great poetry as usual. Thank you for reading my poem.
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Date: 9/17/2025 5:12:00 AM
Funny how scents can trigger memories. Yours is a romance that once was yet is no more. Emotions tied up in this contest write Valsa
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