The Perfume Bottle

Tucked away in one of the dusty corners
of my my deceased mother’s old curio cabinets
sits a somewhat peculiar perfume bottle
among a small collection of other vials
devoid of the fragrances they so long ago retained.

This particular bottle that my gaze has rested on
has the shape of a woman’s lower leg.
What catches the eye 
is the golden high heel it rests upon.
Tiny beads of glittery green
adorn its vamp and finishing edge.

I think of my dear mother
dressed for a night out on the town
in her mid-calf sparkly satin gown,
gliding smoothly on heels of gold which enhanced
the elegance of her long, slender legs.
As she paused at the door,
she’d kiss us on the cheek,
departing in a trail 
of Chantilly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kerr Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 12:33 PM
You excel Andrea in all areas of poetry irrespective of length or subject matter. This work is redolent of warm memories, human dignity and an intimate understanding with a significant person in one’s life. Beautifully articulated. Warm words of gratitude for your slant on Penny For Your Thoughts Howard
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Thanks so much. I can't seem to get decent wins or wins at all with the guy who sponsored this Contest and his recent fort contest. But I did feel good in my own heart about the last two poems I gave him. Just can't seem to give him the type of free verse he seems to like
George Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 10:37 PM
How things of the past can trigger memories. The perfume bottle with the image of a woman's lower leg has spurted out beautiful thoughts of your mother. Well done!
Godwin Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Unique approach and very creative, would love to know where idea/inspiration came from. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:29 PM
From a perfume bottle I have that looks like the one I described here
Crandall Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
That's a nice memory!
Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 7:26 AM
Dear Andrea, it’s such a vivid, tender snapshot of memory and love. I could see your mother in that mid-calf gown, gliding on her golden heels, leaving traces of Chantilly in her wake. There’s so much warmth and reverence in how you write her presence, and it carries your own love and care for her beautifully. - Blessings, Andrea, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:29 PM
The mom part was fictional. Only the bottle was real
Sharma Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Beautiful description and memories to cherish.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:17 PM
what a lovely remembrance of your mom, triggered by a small bottle of perfume. Nicely done for the contest
Hind Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Very beautiful, seems there is a deep meaning to this <3
Rolland Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:07 PM
so moving poem, bring me a tear, i kept a perfume from my mother too, thank you so much
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