The Perfume Bottle

The crystal perfume bottle still remains,
the one he gifted her so long ago,
upon the dressing table veiling pains
of life’s uncaring, unrelenting blow.

The soft gardenia scent still takes him there
to moments shared when loving seemed complete;
unending nights beneath the stars they’d share,
and every sunrise was a joy to greet.

But then one winter day the angels came
to lead another soul to heaven’s keep;
extinguishing the woman’s earthly flame,
and here, behind, her husband’s left to weep.

So now this crystal perfume bottle’s scent,
a fragrant echo of the life they spent.


September 8, 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:31 AM
A wonderful sonnet, congratulations
Gondolf Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate it.
Upadhyay  Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 8:21 PM
This is tender and bittersweet. The perfume bottle becomes a poignant symbol of love, memory, and loss, capturing both intimacy and grief beautifully. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Gondolf Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 2:45 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Krishika, I appreciate it. John
La France Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 4:05 AM
John, your poem is beautifully penned, full of love and grief, well done and best of luck, blessings
Gondolf Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Constance, I appreciate it.
Godwin Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:54 AM
Oh, my, a poem that should have a tissue dispenser attached. You did a great job of breaking hearts with beautiful lines of love bright, then mournfully gone. I felt your sonnet but have to find my own kleenex. Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gondolf Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Thank you for stopping y and sharing your thoughts, CayCay, I'm glad you were able to feel the emotions within my words. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:41 PM
A fragrance, a memory and a moment. Feeling a close connection, because that's the way it should be. This is tender and emotional, yet beautiful all at the same time. A soft sadness lingers within. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. My best to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts my dear friend, I appreciate your continued encouragement. Hugs, John
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:39 PM
a well written Sonnet, one filled with lingering poignancy and remembrance. A great contest entry!
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 1:51 AM
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, Sara, I appreciate it.
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:10 AM
This is beautifully written, John, and lovingly sad.
Gondolf Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Lin, I always appreciate your thoughts. I hope all is well with you. John
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