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The Perfect Painting: Painting and Poetry In One

With her brush and canvas, she charily dash
Slowly and surely, never ever she rushed
Each stroke a decisive measured stoke
Yielding a beauty of light and heavy poke
A family of emotions, she does evoke

Even palette of events she illustrates
As she aims for a perfect painting
People that sees, admiration they rain
Her perfect painting, placed high like bling-bling
Persons exclaim adoration similar to a king

Yet to someone, starting dreams it deteriorate
Is her perfect painting implies coup de grace?
Frustration it deliver... it generates... 
Her encouraging words useless to brace
Even to bounce for a breathing space

Her picture did neither criticize nor mock
Yet, its fairness silently touched and pluck
Probably causing a string of charign
Swift as the gust of a passing wind
The effects felt timeless strong never thins


Inspiration: the video with these: "Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen" by Leonardo de Vinci and "painting is silent poetry and poetry is painting that speaks" by Plutarch

(c) Olive Eloisa
6:20 pm
May 28, 2014
CONTEST: The Perfect Painting
Sponsor: Elly Wouterse
3rd place, to God be the greatest glory.. :)

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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James Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 3:50:00 PM Painting is Poetry, I like those two words fused together, it makes perfect sense. The perfect painting for me, would be the one we have spoken about Oliz ;-) hugs//Dino Jamesxxx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/14/2014 11:26:00 PM Olive,, thank you for the reply Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 6/14/2014 5:55:00 AM This is such a splendid write my dear friend Olive. I love it so much. Yes, i agree with u, painting is rather felt. One of my faves is Leonardo de Vinci. Nice inspiration. Many congratulations on your win my dear friend! love lots and hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/5/2014 6:16:00 AM Thank you for you numerous comments Leonora sweet and endearing.. :)

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/12/2014 9:00:00 AM Go Olive GO! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 10:08:00 PM Wow!!?im happy with those cheers..:D they are so sweet..:) thank you..:)

Joseph May Date: 6/10/2014 7:25:00 PM Congrats on a fine win Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:15:00 AM thank you Joseph..:)

Jerry T Curtis Date: 6/10/2014 5:23:00 PM Yet Another beautiful piece Olive, Congratulations on a win well deserved Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:13:00 AM Thank you Jerry..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 4:06:00 PM Oh, my it is you...LOL.. everytime you comment my comment I get a soup notification through my yahoo mail.. You must love me stopping by...LOL... xox Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:12:00 AM Hahaha of course who would not love Linda to stop by.. Hahaha .:D

Aiyah Torres Date: 6/10/2014 3:55:00 PM surprisingly great!!!! ... Congrats on your awesome winning piece!!! ..:O))).. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:11:00 AM Thank you Aiyah...:) God bless you sweets..:D

Michael Dorken Date: 6/10/2014 3:42:00 PM (charign is a typo in the current version. )Wonderful poem. I loved the bling-bling it was a surprise and yet perfect. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 2:09:00 AM Thanks you very much Michael..:) I also read yours and it's really good..:) kudos as well..:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 3:26:00 PM Olive, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:37:00 PM yes yes.. :) this the one I learned in Elly's theme.. :) that the perfect painting comes both in words and imagery.. :) Thanks sweet LInds.. hugs.. :D

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/10/2014 3:25:00 PM Dear Olive, When we finally achieve "perfection," we do risk dashing the dreams of those who are just starting to work in whatever field we have chosen. Wonderful Win! Congratulations, Carolyn Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:35:00 PM Thank you Carolyn.. :) yes.. this one lesson I learned in the video.. :) and more.. :)

Skat A Date: 6/10/2014 2:38:00 PM Hi Olive, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:34:00 PM tHANK YOU sKAT a.. :) Sweet and pretty you.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/10/2014 2:00:00 PM Oh dear Olive it's wonderful n perfect ! Loved in toto but especially the last stanza the most ,, congrats on great win ! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:33:00 PM Thank you Dr. Upma.. :) yours as well is great.. :) Congratulations and hugs... :D

Seren Roberts Date: 6/10/2014 11:52:00 AM well done Olive, congrats for your 3rd place in one of the most enjoyable contests....Seren Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:27:00 PM yours is good too.. :) I read it and I like it.. :) Congratulations.. :D!!!

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/10/2014 10:21:00 AM Olive, a good write and a win. Congratulations. Mohan Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:29:00 PM Thank You Mohan.. I read yours also and It's a picture perfect too.. :) cOngratulations as well.. :D

Jake Ponce Date: 5/31/2014 10:48:00 AM I could picture a painter, calculating her breath, the weight she puts on her brush and the emotions she must let out in order to create. I can also see multiple muses guiding each move of her brush. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 3:45:00 PM Thank you very much JAke.. :) i appreciate oyur drop by.. :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 5/30/2014 5:21:00 PM Olive; with your words you have painted a beautiful painting - very perfect. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 3:43:00 PM Thank you Lucy.. :) God bless you always.. :) hugs

Paul Callus Date: 5/30/2014 2:54:00 PM Very creative Olive_eloi! Inspiration is the basis for both painting and poetry. Well done :) // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:12:00 PM hahahahaha :D okeis okeis coffeeeee!!! a hot one please.. :D Paul Callus Date: 6/10/2014 2:30:00 PM ...once again.....congratulations!!!! coffee this time:) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 2:45:00 PM Yes Paul.. :) more than inspiration the situation you are in helps you to add more intensity to whatever you want to do.. :) GBU!!! sweets

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2014 10:30:00 PM Good to see you trying another contest out, Olive. Good luck in it. I have not even seen the video yet. This poem makes me feel like you were really inspired by it. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 2:43:00 PM Thank you Andrea.. :) your comments is very much appreciated.. :) see it, it's an open ended video.. :) and it's up to you.. :)

Seren Roberts Date: 5/29/2014 9:31:00 PM Great write Olive, loved it ....Seren Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/1/2014 1:01:00 AM Thank you so much Seren.. :D GBU

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/29/2014 1:32:00 PM very BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 5:31:00 PM Thanks much Arthur..:)

Keith Robson Date: 5/29/2014 10:59:00 AM The poetry is lovely Olive, another very talented poet I have met on this wonderful site! Keith. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 5:26:00 PM Thank you Keith..:) I don't know what to say but thanks GBU

Robert Lindley Date: 5/29/2014 10:53:00 AM My friend, a wonderful write!! Bravo!!!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 5:14:00 PM Thank you very much Robert..:) GBU