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The Perfect Life

No matter what he says Either good or bad You will always be there You will always forgive You will always forget You keep on fighting Striving for the day of perfect harmony Your thinking that it won't take long, after all He's the best dang man you have ever had Then one day it all came true He drops to one knee And asks in the sweetest voice "Will you marry me" You bust out in tears Saying "yes,yes.yes" Your dream finally came true No more fighting No more striving You are in perfect harmony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 9:33:00 AM
instead of perfect harmony on the end put (you are now on your path to your perfect life) it will seem better
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:08:00 PM
Wonderful and congratulations! It is beautiful to find the special one to love always. However striving to be better should never stop from both sides, no? exciting write. Your enthusiasm and happiness is felt through the lines. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/26/2009 8:58:00 PM
lovely sentiments in this poem.. you must love this man very much to wait for him to get his harmony going...
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