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The Supreme Court may invalidate charges against Trump for crimes committed in office. Reminder--like when he tried to reverse the results of an election. If Congress fails to remove a president for criminal activity in the future, our democracy will decline. It could go as follows:  

Potential commander-in-cheat Has a PhD in deceit If courts say he's free We'll see an orgy With pee that D.T. could excrete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/15/2024 3:06:00 PM
I am praying for completely different contenders from both parties. The two right now are both disgusting. How much more stupidity can this nation abide?
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Date: 5/7/2024 12:03:00 PM
Phd in deceit hahah! I know so many with that, especially in politics! This made me smile! Clever one dear duke! And perfect picture to go with it. Clever rhymes, cheat deceit and excrete! Very uniquely stated. And its so very true youve said too there. Wise words. well delivered. I hope america will decide well. Pleasure always reading your work. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 5/7/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting of course. We're in a tough situation over here, and we'll have to see what happens. Many of us are thinking Biden's alliance with Israel and their brutal execution of this war in response to the horrible attack by Hamas will alienate a lot of voters. We're watching and discussing it for now as we have no direct control over this situation as citizens.
Date: 5/6/2024 10:54:00 PM
This is very funny and very true and sad at the same time, nice poem, xoxo
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Date: 5/7/2024 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Aurore, I'm in agreement with you that there is a sad element to all of this. Your comment is very much appreciated!
Date: 5/6/2024 7:56:00 PM
Great limerick, Duke, on the possible effects on democracy should the Supreme Court strike down Trump's criminal charges, especially those relating to his time in office. The possible consequences of Trump evading responsibility for his acts as president were well expressed. Your use of puns and comedy to express serious ideas was really brilliant. Your limerick employs terms like "commander-in-cheat," "deceit," and "orgy" which tend to be more sarcastic in tone. Your amazing limerick is even more impressive since you included the contentious and provocative element of the "pee" reference, which alludes to the historic "golden showers" charges against him.
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Date: 5/7/2024 11:01:00 AM
SP, I love the way you comment on my limericks. Funny how the comments are longer than the poems, but you reinforce to me that it's possible to pack a lot of ideas in a small package. BTW, I responded to you using my personal email address. Hope you saw what I sent to you.
Date: 5/6/2024 7:52:00 PM
He is a criminal without doubt, very apt description, especially 'commander in cheat' - that is a title he has earned~
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Date: 5/7/2024 10:43:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for this comment. Your assessment of this sociopath is spot on. I worry he could rise to national office again. This time around could be a blood bath...his own words. It's all hard to believe really.
Date: 5/6/2024 4:09:00 PM
Nice! Bawdy/ funny, a fabulous graphic--it could happen again! Good job, Duke Thumbs up!
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Date: 5/6/2024 4:19:00 PM
Anaya, thanks...I noticed the graphics you use are wonderful as well. It absolutely could happen again. I wish we had a more civil political environment, but that seems to be a dream at this point.
Date: 5/6/2024 2:55:00 PM
I share your concern about losing our democracy, Duke. So sad that deceit could win the game. The world is watching. A powerful write!
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Date: 5/6/2024 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Vijay. Many of us are worried. I just wrote a letter to each member of the Supreme Court expressing concern about their upcoming rule on the former president's case. I hope they realize the gravity of any potential immunization for criminal activity as president. Thanks for being here and for being such a wonderful poet.
Date: 5/6/2024 2:38:00 PM
I suppose if he says something and keeps repeating it people will start to believe him. Perish the thought. Tom
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 5/6/2024 4:15:00 PM
Tom, yes seems to work that way. We have a real problem here with a lack of questioning among many citizens as well as an inability to put facts together in a meaningful way that may not indicate we're on target with our beliefs.
Date: 5/6/2024 1:32:00 PM
Well expressed. I’m with you on this one. Thanks for your kind visits.
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Date: 5/6/2024 4:11:00 PM
Richard, you have a great gift for poetry and story telling. A pleasure to read your material and thanks for being here!!!
Date: 5/6/2024 1:26:00 PM
OMG the cartoon pic is hilarious and i love the 'commander in cheat line . How folk cant see through the facade is beyond me:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/6/2024 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan...I believe that Biden has problems with some of his positions as well, but he has empathy, self control, honor, and understands fairness. He doesn't always do the right thing in my opinion, but he can change his mind. The orange man will do whatever is in his own self interest and lie to get what he wants. The rest just stretch the truth a bit. OMG.

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