The Penknob Kid
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Poetic Form: Ottava Rima
Inspired: 2024 May 17
Image: Don't Miss Your Shot by ParentMap
PENKNOB: Is our household word that my kids euphemistically created of the two phrases that I purposely refrained its actual pronunciation by slurring PENKNOB: Phrase #1. Hands-Off/or don't touch; #2. Shut-Up/or be quiet. My youngest daughter would say that word when we're at the doctors.
Tonal voiceration I've introduced to my family, whereby the harsh realities that preexist in common societiy can be adjusted through respectable levels of plain and common decency via communication.
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Penknob, my sick
self tired from
those daily
pokes,
Oh, Penknob,
saddening --
tearing eye
exposed,
Penknob girl strong
inside mirror
be screen
smokes
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as Penknob pairs
a tearing o'er a
snub-nosed,
the nurse in white
and a tray of
Penknob
jokes,
Penknob done we
smile I hurt a
while, my
clothes,
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Fiddle some skittle,
Penknob quick-n
-dandy,
Penknob me --
my smile with
pink cotton
candy
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