The Pebble

Millennia ago it started as a rock
that was about the size of a fist.
It got swept to the edge lodging
against two mighty bounders.

Staying there for a century or two
it was finally small enough to escape.
Tumbling down the face of the fall
it landed  at its shingle coated base.

For many years at least five hundred
it was tossed and rolled and polished.
Now the size and shape of an egg
it glistened and sparkled in sunlight.

Finally washed out it headed seaward
coming to rest on a sandy beach.
Where it was found and treasured 
by a child who saw its magic and lore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Inman Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:24 AM
A beautifully mystical tale.
Dutta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Natural life story of a pebble. Nicely composed. Enjoyed each line.
Teagan Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:10 PM
I like this! What an interesting way to describe the journey and transformation.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 4:13 PM
This is a lovely way to describe how it got so small, Shadow! A good model for what you want in your challenge.
Poteet Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Love looking through rocks at a local restaurant with my grandson. We finish eating earlier than other family members and on warm days, I take him outside to explore. Lovely piece, I will adapt it to a story to tell him sometime.
Ashley Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Shadow, I love the story you told of the pebble's journey through time and space, facing the elements and erosion till it finally landed in its final destination - treasured in a child's hands. Oh, the stories this pebble could tell... A fantastic poem with beautiful heart! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 3:01 AM
ty for your visit glad you enjoyed it hugs
Sands Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Nicely written Shadow. I enjoyed it and the special ending too :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 3:03 AM
ty Heidi your visit is appreciated pleased that you enjoyed it hugs
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