Notes About The Poem

The Pearl Necklace


Old jewelry box,
with grandma's pearls and pendants.
How, I love them still !
They wanted to bury her,
with the pearls-  but I hid them.

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May 25, 2016

Traditional Tanka


Submitted to the contest, New or Old 4
sponsor, Eve Roper

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Day Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:20 AM
Cute, classy and a bit naughty - a perfect combination. Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Lovely to read this again Constance:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Congrats on your superb win my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 10:16 PM
I really like this one. An element of humor, but a bit classier topic than mine!! I'm outta here now, BW!!! Luv ya
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, this is true also, no way I wanted them to bury that necklace, and I wesar it often and grandma is with me when I do...
Sathasivam Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Rave, thanks for the excellent, the pearl necklace means a lot to me...
Beaufort Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 7:08 AM
I think they are better off with you to keep as a fond memory. You have such a kind heart. As always, you touch the souls of those of us lucky enough to have a moment to come to this space. And as per usual, in this brief moment of time and space, let me send you kind thoughts if that is possible in this universe of ours. You are just such a bright beacon of goodness.
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Duke, thanks for the lovely comment, my grandma and me had a special bond and I know in my heart that she would want me to have that necklace and I do.. so all is, as it should be...
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Nice tanka:) All the best:)
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Jo, thanks so much for the compliment and visit ~
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Very touching Constance good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thanks Jan and hugs and kisses back to you ~
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful tanka, Constance, good luck in the contest :-) 7
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Eve thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the 7 !!
Smith Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Well done B/W, best wishes in the contest...
La France Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Charlie, thanks so much for the compliment `
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