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The Peaceful Pond

The Peaceful Pond A frog jumped into a pond Made a ripple across to the other side The water and frog had a bond That pushed others’ relationships aside Fish swam by in a little school And sunlight filtered through the water Reflections were shown in the little pond Then sunlight fades when it becomes later Moonshine brings other creatures into the night Crickets and cicadas will buzz about And fireflies will show their own light Then shows a scene that ends with a shout Then a splash and the bubbles triple And the night ends with the last ripple Written on December 9, 2019 Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT L, any form any theme sponsored by Brian Strand 1st place in ALL YOURS (Feb 10) sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 2/14/2020 10:27:00 AM
Is the water jealous of the new bond between the frog and the delicious looking bugs in the night? LOL Congrats on your honors, Dylan.
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Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 2/18/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for reading! And yes, so much so the water drowns a person, as you can read in the last three lines. The water was so completely jealous of some measly bugs being eaten, totally ;) Thank you again for reading!
Date: 2/1/2020 3:20:00 AM
This is a really calming read, Felt like I was beside the same pond with you watching time pass.
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Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 2/11/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem! I really appreciate you took the time to do so! Thank you! Also, most of my poems have a darker theme to them, and in this one there was a murder, if you interpret it that way. That's why I asked for others' interpretations. In this poem, I meant an argument between two people and then one is pushed into the water and drowns, but I can see how someone might think it is people having fun playing in the water or something else. I would like to hear how you interpreted it. Thank you for reading!
Date: 1/23/2020 8:52:00 PM
Hi! If you read my poems, please tell me your interpretations of them in the comments. Thank you!
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