The Pawn Folly

Sand-like cliffs reaching up as towers
 thier sole purpose, but to measure hours,
 feels a though I'm stuck in a cage
 resulting in more visitations with rage;
 
There's not enough drink to fade it away
 and too much left to quit it, today.
 A good woman could help me put it down
 but, there doesn't seem to be any of them, around.
 
Gravity's pulling just as hard as she'd might
 and, the extra pull, has brought upon us, the night;
 and, just as noon can coerce the dew to fade
 night got real lucky, bartering for trade;
 
for day's sky and night's sky yearned for folly to be
 each dimension's signature for eternity;
 pawn folly was divided into both these domains
 giving birth to split issues, and more difficult planes.
 
But, on l keep trudging, as on l must go
 who'll win in the long-run, believe l'll never know,
 l've donned my best hat and, my only warm cloak
 but it's hard to realize that I'm the butt of the joke!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest David G. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
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August 13, 2012 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations David xx
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 2:04 AM
david congrats on your win..David
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August 13, 2012 at 1:52 AM
DAVID.....congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:05 AM
David a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2012 at 2:03 AM
10 - Q for the warm, well-wishes...I look forward to being a part of your site, here...as well as explore it's plethora of spices, & recipe tricks so I, too will be able to make better: "poetry soup" !
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