The Pavilion!

Sitting underneath this pavilion, thinking....

Of how I have beheld the shadows of darkness' scorching face

Sweeping across the skies of all of life, trying its very best

To encase them, within its sorrows of sorrow!

Some people say or think, that I do not know tears?

But oh, how I surely do....

And some people say or think, that I do not know lose?

But oh, how I sadly do....

Always trying to entangle the light, this darkness

Arising and rising, to spread its wings of woe

To cast its shadows of despair, upon them that hold?

Trying to permeate, with its hopelessness and lies....

No one can escape, not even I, the brushings of its wings

But long ago, "Christ" delivered me, from its grip of death

And yet it is a relentless realm, whereof no flesh is immune

Unto its ever searching and seething spears of plights

Mercy though, and time, have taught me well....

For when I see its poisoned fangs, its twisted snarling face

By the Power of Grace, within "Heavens Boundless Love"

I crush it underneath my feet, as quickly and surely, as I possibly can!

But others like to intwine themselves; always holding on

Perpetuating, within these fetters that are cast

Yet not I, it is not my purpose in this life, not anymore....

I would rather shed the light of hope, to a heart

And to a soul, that has been battered and torn asunder

By this deceivingly vicious, and timeless foe!?

Sitting underneath this pavilion of ancient old

Glancing at a gondola passing by, as I consider this life....

Sifting through these silver copper and golden coins

Offered into this color laced basket, along the paths of time

Amid the corridores, these souls, long, before they were ever born....

Some people say, that I do not know?

But oh this vase of clouds within this realm of sight

For clarity, is yet a fleeting of truth

Unto the eyes which fail to seek and to know

Beyond their own chains; these fetters of will....

Let me extend this candle, by "Grace," let it shine on high

For all to see, and for all of life, these, "Mercies Hands!"

Some people say, that I have never felt?

But I say, break these binds, seek and you shall find....

Darkness, slayed forever at your feet; bleeding out

Underneath the pavilion, of Heavens provincial "Light!"

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Some people say?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/17/2008 9:48:00 PM
Tears and loss come to us all. Beautiful and thoughtful write. Fighting off sin and temptation is a lifetime battle. (Ephesians 5:8-14) Thank you for all your comments. I'm always happy to hear from you whenever you have time. And the "flatulence" I was refering to is all the thoughts building up and swelling in my mind. I just had to get it out. Be well and God bless. Love Robin
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:00:00 AM
thanks for your feed back on all my poems and thanks for your wonderful thoughts and thanks just for being you, you are a true friend and a brother in the Lord Jesus, God bless you from diane
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Date: 11/16/2008 8:39:00 AM
This is just so elegant John. With each of your postings I learn to understand things better and this one was so spiritual to me. I wish that may God never let you know tears and pain of losing. I found such a good friend in you. You give so much hope in times of sorrow. I'm so down these days, so when I read your loving comments, its like a happiness syrup for me. Thanks a lot for your support. And this poem certainly goes into my favs! Lots of love to you, Chitra
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Date: 11/16/2008 7:09:00 AM
God bless you john and thanks for your wonderful thoughts and feed back it means a lot and is greatly appriciated, love from diane
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Date: 11/16/2008 7:08:00 AM
thank you john for your comments on thank you for my children, just 7 days to go now, we so exitied oh they just can not wait to be born again of the Lord, a new life a new identity, their whole dna will be changed there way of thinking eevrything will be new like a baby lamb in spring, it will be awesome when they give there testomonies next week. leanne wants to be baptized to be born again, to be closer to God and Jesus and to be free from satan, thats what she told them at church bless her.
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Date: 11/16/2008 6:29:00 AM
Hey to you, John! This is profound, but has a smooth flow. Shackles, "fetters", when it comes to Faith, it is more like a bridle that guides us, though one will never feel harnessed. Held most assuredly by these "hands of Mercy". I think of when I was little, and would go to mass,the priest would always talk about 'péché', which means 'sins'. I aways thought he was talking about fishing. Faith holds no hook nor net. I hope you're well, John! God bless you and yours. Luv 2U Mikki
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Date: 11/15/2008 8:00:00 PM
This write is so complete, it is full of Faith, Love, and Hope...have a blessed evening my friend, I love reading your work...always, Christy
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Date: 11/15/2008 7:39:00 PM
let the light shine on high, he delivered all who wants to attain to repentance, great write full of depth and emotion and truths, and thanks for your comments, hope that you are well, take care D-ncye
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