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The Patient Owl

Above, the Moon was a delight Her silver face graced the night. Moonbeams fell on branch and leaf Then danced across the earth beneath. She cast her glow on garden sheds Her silver sheen lit flower beds, Moonbeams touched on weather vanes Then shimmered down old cobbled lanes, The patient owl by moonlight, still. Waited quietly, for his kill. Entry for LATE AUGUST 2018 PREMIERE,ANY FORM,ANY THEME, UP TO TO A MAX OF 20 ,LINES Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 24/8/18. placed 9th.

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Date: 8/27/2018 11:03:00 AM
Chilling yet, well penned.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/27/2018 12:52:00 PM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 8/26/2018 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/27/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 8/25/2018 8:52:00 PM
Your shimmering moonlit imagery is graced with lovely rhythm and wondrous rhymes, Emile, and sets the quiet night mood perfectly for the impact of your last two lines.. Gorgeous poetry in every way. Best wishes for a wonderful win my friend.. ~Susan
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/26/2018 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 8/25/2018 4:36:00 PM
delightfully light filled rhyme and rhythm beautifully penned. An obvious first -thank you
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Virginia :)
Date: 8/25/2018 7:11:00 AM
Fabulous piece Gary! A winner for me :) xomo
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 8/25/2018 7:07:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Gary. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Francis :)
Date: 8/24/2018 8:10:00 PM
very intriguing write
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Sand Blown :)

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