The Patience of a Heron

He sat on the dock on a rainy day,
this heron; little and green.  He was
patiently fishing the cold, dark waters.
For now, his meal was a minnow.

This heron, little and green he was
in my mind, reminded me of someone else.
For now, her meal was small as a minnow.
I saw her in Nanaimo wandering the streets.

In my mind, reminding of someone else
I was startled to see how industrious she was.
I saw her in Nanaimo wandering the streets,
her shopping cart full of tattered belongings.

I was startled to see how industrious she was
searching the wet streets for her next meal,
shopping cart full of tattered belongings.
She seemed to have the patience of a heron.

     For now, his meal was small as a minnow,
     patiently fishing the cold, dark waters.
     This heron, little and green he was...
     he sat on the dock on a rainy day.
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Smith Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 1:29 PM
Only a beautiful soul could write something like this. This 72 year old romantic poet with life experience to match says so. glad you decided to share this poem with all of us on the soup. Regards David in NZ
Harp Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, David in New Zealand where I wish I could be right now. Beautiful country full of beautiful souls. I'm so glad you liked my poem. I was boating up in Canada and saw this homeless woman in Nanaimo, which is the inspiration of this poem. Moon Harp
Toney Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 8:17 AM
A very thought-provoking pantoum. It’s very kind of you to compare the industriousness of the woman experiencing homelessness to the patient diligence of the heron. A Fav poem.
Callus Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 8:59 AM
The patience of a heron travels in a circle and finishes where it all started. Certainly a delightful introductory poem on Soup. ~ Regards // paul
Harp Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so much, Paul, for appreciating my poem.
Tor Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Love the association you made with the homeless Moon Harp. Nicely written and loved the theme you chose. Clever of you to do so. Thanks for sharing...
Harp Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much, Michael, for appreciating this rainy day poem. God bless you.
Fisher Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:19 PM
This is wonderful, Moon! The comparison is so relatable. I must admit that I study the heron more than the homeless. Enjoyed your poem.
Harp Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much, David.
Agustin Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Harp Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much Beata.
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