The Patience of a Heron

He sat on the dock on a rainy day,
this heron; little and green.  He was
patiently fishing the cold, dark waters.
For now, his meal was a minnow.

This heron, little and green he was
in my mind, reminded me of someone else.
For now, her meal was small as a minnow.
I saw her in Nanaimo wandering the streets.

In my mind, reminding of someone else
I was startled to see how industrious she was.
I saw her in Nanaimo wandering the streets,
her shopping cart full of tattered belongings.

I was startled to see how industrious she was
searching the wet streets for her next meal,
shopping cart full of tattered belongings.
She seemed to have the patience of a heron.

     For now, his meal was small as a minnow,
     patiently fishing the cold, dark waters.
     This heron, little and green he was...
     he sat on the dock on a rainy day.

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Date: 1/17/2025 8:17:00 AM
A very thought-provoking pantoum. It’s very kind of you to compare the industriousness of the woman experiencing homelessness to the patient diligence of the heron. A Fav poem.
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Date: 1/9/2025 8:59:00 AM
The patience of a heron travels in a circle and finishes where it all started. Certainly a delightful introductory poem on Soup. ~ Regards // paul
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Moon Harp
Date: 1/10/2025 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul, for appreciating my poem.
Date: 12/14/2024 10:54:00 AM
Love the association you made with the homeless Moon Harp. Nicely written and loved the theme you chose. Clever of you to do so. Thanks for sharing...
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Moon Harp
Date: 1/10/2025 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michael, for appreciating this rainy day poem. God bless you.
Date: 11/21/2024 5:19:00 PM
This is wonderful, Moon! The comparison is so relatable. I must admit that I study the heron more than the homeless. Enjoyed your poem.
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Moon Harp
Date: 11/21/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, David.
Date: 11/18/2024 2:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/21/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Beata.
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