The Pathway I Will Lay For You

The pathway I will lay for you with seeds that I will scatter round will soon have blooms come into view so you can tread on fragrant ground and feel your spirit fill with song when we can meet among the blue of blooms that will have sprung along the pathway I will lay for you! for the 8 Lines 7 Words Enjambment Poetry Contest of Rick Parise

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Date: 11/22/2014 11:07:00 AM
Pretty one, Andrea! I like this-- dreamy. Hope you are well. I think your Thanksgiving is this week, right? I recall you and yours do it up big ;) Have fun, eat your fill and enjoy. Cheers. Cyndi
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Date: 11/9/2014 7:16:00 AM
I see by the comments that you won. Of course you did. This is a gem whispering of the anticipation of love and romance.
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:48:00 PM
back to say my Congratulations, Andrea! read it again and i love it even more!
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Date: 11/3/2014 6:56:00 PM
Lovely and wonderful piece,Andrea...Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. A lovely poem and I love the theme.
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Date: 11/3/2014 8:45:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on ur top win dear Andrea!
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Date: 11/3/2014 7:19:00 AM
This is just fantastic, congrats Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2014 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your FIRST place win. I already faved this one the first time I read it.
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Date: 11/2/2014 7:16:00 PM
Love what you did here, Andrea...beautifully written; I felt I was walking down that path you laid as I read. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea, as I said before, I knew you would be on the top of the podium for your lovely poem! Beautiful! Congratulations to you! Sandra
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:05:00 PM
This is lovely, a huge congrats. BG
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Date: 11/2/2014 4:08:00 PM
Nice construct, the flow is perfect and sound. Congrats.
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:56:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:13:00 PM
Upbeat entry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:06:00 PM
many congrats Andrea - I knew this was a winner the first time I read it:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:00:00 PM
Way to go with this exceptional winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/28/2014 8:51:00 AM
This is yet another lyrical poem. You have no idea how much I had the capability to write music. You would be my lyricist.
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Date: 10/26/2014 4:34:00 PM
I just read your tribute to Lucilla. This sounds like it could have been her writing through you. Once again, you have done an awesome job with another style. You asked, so I'm telling, :) you missed Lame Name Game. Peace. :)
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Date: 10/26/2014 10:24:00 AM
aww, this is just beautiful, Andrea
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:33:00 AM
Andrea, yes I know I've read this one before but I enjoyed it so I wanted to read it again and yes I think it is a wonderful piece, it's a very positive piece and I wanted to start my day out with such a positive read, thanks for sharing it with us good luck with in the contest, cheri
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:36:00 PM
What a graceful and smooth treat this poem is Andrea...just love it!
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:34:00 PM
another beautiful poem :) eve
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:58:00 PM
Andrea, this is so beautifully written - and all in one very smooth, rhythmic, rhyming sentence! You will be on that podium for sure! Sandra
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:30:00 PM
What an uber long sentence and yet so free flowing. And I love how it goes full circle. I detect a win in your future!
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Date: 10/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Nice poem! At our old house in Bumbletown we scattered seeds like you describe to the sides of our curving driveway, forgot, and then in the spring nature reminded us! Thank you for reminding me of this with your sweet little poem!
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