Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

The Pathway I Will Lay For You

The pathway I will lay for you
with seeds that I will scatter round
will soon have blooms come into view
so you can tread on fragrant ground
and feel your spirit fill with song
when we can meet among the blue
of blooms that will have sprung along
the pathway I will lay for you!

for the 8 Lines 7 Words Enjambment Poetry Contest of Rick Parise

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Cyndi Macmillan November 22, 2014 at 11:07 AM Pretty one, Andrea! I like this-- dreamy. Hope you are well. I think your Thanksgiving is this week, right? I recall you and yours do it up big ;) Have fun, eat your fill and enjoy. Cheers. Cyndi

Monterey Sirak November 9, 2014 at 7:16 AM I see by the comments that you won. Of course you did. This is a gem whispering of the anticipation of love and romance.

Hija De La Luna November 5, 2014 at 8:48 PM back to say my Congratulations, Andrea! read it again and i love it even more!

Olusegun Arowolo November 3, 2014 at 6:56 PM Lovely and wonderful piece,Andrea...Congrats on your well deserved win....

Brenda Meier-Hans November 3, 2014 at 9:35 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea. A lovely poem and I love the theme.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 3, 2014 at 8:45 AM And back again wid huge congrats on ur top win dear Andrea!

Kayod5 Kayode November 3, 2014 at 7:19 AM This is just fantastic, congrats Andrea

Maurice Yvonne November 2, 2014 at 9:20 PM Congratulations Andrea on your FIRST place win. I already faved this one the first time I read it.

Faye Gibson November 2, 2014 at 7:16 PM Love what you did here, Andrea...beautifully written; I felt I was walking down that path you laid as I read. Congratulations.

Sandra Haight November 2, 2014 at 6:23 PM Hi Andrea, as I said before, I knew you would be on the top of the podium for your lovely poem! Beautiful! Congratulations to you! Sandra

Barbara Gorelick November 2, 2014 at 6:05 PM This is lovely, a huge congrats. BG

Rob Carmack November 2, 2014 at 4:08 PM Nice construct, the flow is perfect and sound. Congrats.

Joseph May November 2, 2014 at 2:56 PM Congrats on a great win Andrea

Debbie Guzzi November 2, 2014 at 2:13 PM Upbeat entry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jan Allison November 2, 2014 at 2:06 PM many congrats Andrea - I knew this was a winner the first time I read it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2014 at 2:00 PM Way to go with this exceptional winner..Congrats..Sara

Jennifer Walker October 28, 2014 at 8:51 AM This is yet another lyrical poem. You have no idea how much I had the capability to write music. You would be my lyricist.

Robert Johnson October 26, 2014 at 4:34 PM I just read your tribute to Lucilla. This sounds like it could have been her writing through you. Once again, you have done an awesome job with another style. You asked, so I'm telling, :) you missed Lame Name Game. Peace. :)

Jack Horne October 26, 2014 at 10:24 AM aww, this is just beautiful, Andrea

Cherl Dunn October 26, 2014 at 7:33 AM Andrea, yes I know I've read this one before but I enjoyed it so I wanted to read it again and yes I think it is a wonderful piece, it's a very positive piece and I wanted to start my day out with such a positive read, thanks for sharing it with us good luck with in the contest, cheri

David Mohn October 25, 2014 at 7:36 PM What a graceful and smooth treat this poem is Andrea...just love it!

Eve Roper October 25, 2014 at 6:34 PM another beautiful poem :) eve

Sandra Haight October 24, 2014 at 6:58 PM Andrea, this is so beautifully written - and all in one very smooth, rhythmic, rhyming sentence! You will be on that podium for sure! Sandra

Timothy Hicks October 24, 2014 at 5:30 PM What an uber long sentence and yet so free flowing. And I love how it goes full circle. I detect a win in your future!

Dan Helppi October 24, 2014 at 4:03 PM Nice poem! At our old house in Bumbletown we scattered seeds like you describe to the sides of our curving driveway, forgot, and then in the spring nature reminded us! Thank you for reminding me of this with your sweet little poem!

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