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The Past Keeps Creeping, Creeping

The past comes in a nightmare dream, pain I've worked so hard to forget; to hold back sadness and regret, I see the place where I grew up. And all the graves in rows closeup, my home by a rippling stream; where in my lone bed I was weeping, listening to a train whistle. The need to leave was abyssal, holding back tears I walked away; into the wild world to stray, but the past keeps creeping, creeping. ____________________________ May 9, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/The Past Keeps Creeping, Creeping Copyright Protected, ID 19-1223-635-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into Strand Select F Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 2/13/2020 4:05:00 AM
A beautiful poem written with great feeling, Constance. Howard
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Date: 2/14/2020 9:26:00 AM
Howard thanks for visiting with the beautiful _Constance
Date: 2/7/2020 10:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance. I think the word repetition at the end reinforces the sense of movement and the theme of the poem. Really nice!
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Date: 2/8/2020 11:38:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 2/7/2020 5:18:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart … the past always follows us like a shadow but the sun is ahead of us - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay
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Date: 2/7/2020 6:18:00 PM
Lindsay, thanks for visiting my poetry and the comment, appreciate _Constance

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