The Passing of Summer

Do you feel the breath of autumn upon your neck?
The smell of damp leaves in the predawn gloom

A pallid sun rises without warmth
Too far away, too far away

So soon the time for rest is upon us
Leaves flame red and orange on the branch in timely tribute

The queen of summer has played her last song
And in requiem we lament her passing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 6:10 PM
I love this and I see it 's the last one you posted here. Just looking up old friends from my favorite poet list and wishing you a merry xmas. Please come back!!
Helbaoui Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 1:42 AM
Loved the poem, and Autumn is my favorite season as well. Enjoyed it a lot, Sami.
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November 22, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Nick, good poem,, can't wait for ther return next year, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Love Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 8:13 AM
love the imagery
Davis Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Crisp, layers and lovely...just like autumn. ;-) Nice one :-)
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Summer is always too short for me, the fall can be nice but I'm a "summer - girl" - Like the poem Nick. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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