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The Passing of Mother

The day my mother passed- I was shattered, I found myself wandering in a trance; my sister had to hold my hand like a child, there was an emptiness deep within me. I was screaming inside- but she was too young God, it is so unfair God, why my mother; did you really need another angel that bad, yes, I was angry and I was broken. My sister and I planned the wake and memorial, and I think we did an amazing job of it; we selected a rose pink dress for mother to wear, and we both agreed she looked beautiful. (but I will never forget the smell of those pink roses) We stood holding hands as visitors arrived, and held back tears keeping our frozen smiles; we thought it would never end but it finally did, then, we were left alone with mother. and we wept . . . For she was the best mother to us every single day, loving us no matter what stupid thing we did; welcoming us home with open arms from failed love, and how can we ever forget that beautiful smile. She was loved by all who had ever met her, at her memorial people waited in long lines; to pay their respects for my mother- my best friend, and still I am broken because I miss her . . . every moment of every day . . . ____________________________ December 9, 2019 Poem/Narrative/The Passing of Mother Copyright Protected ID 10-1206-515-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Memorial of a Loved One sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke Second Place

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Date: 12/14/2019 7:30:00 PM
What a beautiful loving tribute to your mother Constance. Congratulations on your worthy second placement. I am sorry for your loss. Blessings, Connie
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:48:00 AM
Connie, thanks so much for visiting and for the beautiful and congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 12/14/2019 10:09:00 AM
Your heart inspired me to enter this content. I did it for my mother. Panagiota. I am in the last place but grateful!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:49:00 AM
Panagiota, so happy I inspired you, that is the best compliment, it does not matter what place you receive what matters is the beauty of your words !
Date: 12/14/2019 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:50:00 AM
Greg, thanks for the congrats!
Date: 12/13/2019 9:23:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Dear Heart.. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:50:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the congrats!
Date: 12/10/2019 12:16:00 AM
"held back tears keeping our frozen smiles;" You have described the nuances of grief so well Constance. It is a private thing, you keep close to you always. It comes out at the most unexpected times. I am glad you have a sister. Your mother sounds terrific.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:51:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, yes my mom was terrific and my sister is too !
Date: 12/9/2019 8:21:00 PM
A beautiful dedication. I never got a long with my mom so when she passed it wasnt that hard on me. I`m glad you were close to your mom. Best of luck in the contest Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:52:00 AM
Greg, thanks for visiting and for the comment, yes I know I was lucky to have such a wonderful mother !
Date: 12/9/2019 7:34:00 PM
Great write, Dear Heart, moments like these you never forget. you get angry and wonder why.. not fare .. Good luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:53:00 AM
Eve, thank you for the compliment and the comment, yes, with each death we must go through those steps of grief, till we reach acceptance, still working on it !

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